SnacksPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

When do you usually eat snacks now?

Thí sinh

Well, I don't have a fixed time. I mean, when I feel hungry I will eat snacks. Like the times between meals or even when I'm staying up late I will eat snacks at midnight.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?

Thí sinh

Well it depends. Snacks like you get over some vegetable chips I think they are OK because they contains no sugar. But some fried things like chips I think they are totally unhealthy.

Giám khảo

Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't because my parents set a strict rule for me to prevent me eating lots of snacks. At that time I couldn't quite understand, but today I began to realize it.

Giám khảo

What snacks do you like to eat?

Thí sinh

Well I'm really into eating potato chips but I know they're not healthy so I only eat from time to time. But I develop a happy for drinking yogurt and I think the nutrients.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

When do you usually eat snacks now?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显重复,且缺少连接词使内容连贯。建议使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”来丰富细节,并避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks whenever I feel hungry, for example, between meals or even late at night when I'm staying up.

Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容有一定逻辑,但语法错误较多,且表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致,使用连接词如“however”来对比不同类型的零食。

Ví dụ: It depends; for example, vegetable chips are okay because they contain no sugar. However, fried snacks like regular chips are totally unhealthy.

Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但时态使用不够准确,且缺少连接词。建议使用过去时态一致,并用“but now”连接前后句。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't often eat snacks because my parents set strict rules to prevent me from eating too many. At that time, I didn't understand, but now I realize why.

What snacks do you like to eat?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,且缺少连贯性。建议改正语法错误,使用连接词如“however”来表达转折,并具体说明喜欢酸奶的原因。

Ví dụ: I'm really into potato chips, but I know they're unhealthy, so I only eat them occasionally. However, I have developed a liking for drinking yogurt because it is nutritious.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Snacks like you get over some vegetable chips I think they are OK because they contains no sugar.

Snacks like some vegetable chips I think they are OK because they contain no sugar.

这里的主语是复数形式的'snacks',谓语动词应该用复数形式'contain',而不是单数形式'contains'。动词需要与主语在人称和数上一致。

Singular and plural issue

× But some fried things like chips I think they are totally unhealthy.

But some fried things like chips I think they are totally unhealthy.

该句无语法错误,复数形式使用正确。

Past tense issue

× At that time I couldn't quite understand, but today I began to realize it.

At that time I couldn't quite understand, but today I have begun to realize it.

句中'today'表示从过去到现在的持续状态,应该使用现在完成时'have begun',而不是一般过去时'began'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× But I develop a happy for drinking yogurt and I think the nutrients.

But I have developed a liking for drinking yogurt and I think about the nutrients.

短语中'happy for'用法错误,正确表达应为'have developed a liking for'表示喜欢某事;另外,'think the nutrients'缺少介词,正确应为'think about the nutrients'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
HealthyWell; Health-giving
HungryRavenous; Eager
LateBehind schedule; Dead; Behind schedule; After hours
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