Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct phrases and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear expressions. For example, clarify the time you eat snacks and use proper terms like 'mid-morning' or 'afternoon'.

Ví dụ: I don't usually eat snacks, but when I do, it's often between lunch and dinner, usually in the afternoon. I avoid eating snacks late at night.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I believe that eating snacks can be healthy if done in moderation. Therefore, I try to limit myself to having treats only once a week to maintain a balanced diet.

Gợi ý: Avoid awkward phrasing and pronoun errors. Use clear and natural expressions. Also, provide more specific details to support your answer.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved eating snacks very often. However, my father was strict and told me that snacks were not good for my health, so I had to limit them.

Gợi ý: Improve your vocabulary and sentence structure. Use correct expressions like 'I have a sweet tooth' and avoid confusing phrases. Be specific about your preferences.

Ví dụ: I have a sweet tooth, so I usually prefer eating sweet snacks like cakes, chocolates, or other desserts.

× I'm not that much of A snacks person, but when I do eat I frequently consume it between lunch and break breakfast or maybe in the afternoon as a supper, but never late at night.

✓ I'm not that much of a snacks person, but when I do eat, I frequently consume them between lunch and breakfast break or maybe in the afternoon as supper, but never late at night.

The phrase 'A snacks person' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'snacks'. The phrase 'break breakfast' is incorrect and should be 'breakfast break'. 'As a supper' should be 'as supper' because 'supper' is uncountable here.

× I don't believe in restricting snacks completely just for your health.

✓ I don't believe in completely restricting snacks just for your health.

The placement of 'completely' is better before the verb 'restricting' to clearly modify the action. This improves clarity and naturalness in English.

× So what I would do is maybe I would limit my time into consuming treats like once a week.

✓ So what I would do is maybe limit my time consuming treats to once a week.

After 'would do is', the base form of the verb should be used, not 'would limit'. Also, 'limit my time into consuming' is incorrect; it should be 'limit my time consuming'. The phrase 'like once a week' is better expressed as 'to once a week' to indicate frequency.

× Younger me would have been happy to eat snacks every minute, but my dad was really strict on treats because he would always say that it was not beneficial for her health.

✓ Younger me would have been happy to eat snacks every minute, but my dad was really strict on treats because he would always say that it was not beneficial for my health.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to themselves ('younger me'), so 'my' should be used to maintain consistency.

× I'm more of a sweet person over celery food so I have sweet teeth so most of the time I would like to eat cakes or chocolates or it's like dessert as snacks.

✓ I'm more of a sweet person over savory food, so I have a sweet tooth, so most of the time I like to eat cakes or chocolates or desserts as snacks.

'Celery food' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'savory food'. 'Sweet teeth' should be 'a sweet tooth' as the idiomatic expression is singular. 'It's like dessert as snacks' is awkward; 'desserts as snacks' is correct plural form and clearer.