Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using linking words to connect ideas, and avoiding repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes and clarify your points.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I take a break because they help me relax and relieve stress. Sometimes, I share snacks like chocolate bars with my friends, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

Ví dụ: I believe most snacks are unhealthy, but it's important to control how much you eat. For example, I limit myself to only one snack bar per day to maintain a balanced diet.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by organising your ideas more clearly and using linking words. Also, correct grammar errors and try to be more specific in your explanation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially in primary school. However, I used to eat snacks before sleeping without brushing my teeth, which caused my tooth to decay.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words and appropriate vocabulary. Avoid contradictory statements and focus on specific reasons why you like the snack.

Ví dụ: My favourite snack is a hazelnut-flavoured chocolate bar because it gives me energy and makes me feel happy. Eating sweets can be comforting, especially when I'm feeling stressed.

× I usually eat snacks when I would take a rest and snacks and help me to release some pressure and I can release that fluidity and I can share the snacks with my friends and my favorite snacks is a chocolate bar.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I take a rest, and snacks help me to release some pressure. I can release that fluidity and share the snacks with my friends. My favorite snack is a chocolate bar.

The phrase 'when I would take a rest' incorrectly uses 'would' with a habitual action. The correct form is the simple present 'when I take a rest' to indicate regular habits. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× my favorite snacks is a chocolate bar.

✓ My favorite snack is a chocolate bar.

The subject 'favorite snacks' is plural, but the predicate 'is a chocolate bar' is singular. To agree, 'snack' should be singular to match 'a chocolate bar'.

× I think most of snacks are unhealthy but I need the healthy things is you need to control yourself when you eat, how much you eat and for me I will control by myself.

✓ I think most snacks are unhealthy, but the healthy thing is you need to control yourself when you eat, how much you eat, and for me, I will control myself.

The phrase 'most of snacks' is incorrect; 'most snacks' is the correct quantifier usage. Also, 'the healthy things is' should be 'the healthy thing is' to match singular subject and verb.

× I control myself or one day I only eat one snack bar.

✓ I control myself, and one day I only eat one snack bar.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used here; 'and' is appropriate to connect the two related ideas.

× I always ate snacks when I was young especially when I was in primary school and I got my tooth broken because I love eating snacks before sleep but I never brush my teeth so my tooth are broken.

✓ I always ate snacks when I was young, especially when I was in primary school, and I got my tooth broken because I loved eating snacks before sleep but I never brushed my teeth, so my tooth was broken.

The verbs 'love' and 'brush' should be in past tense 'loved' and 'brushed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'tooth are broken' is incorrect; 'tooth was broken' is correct for singular subject.

× my tooth are broken.

✓ My tooth is broken.

The subject 'tooth' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× My favorite snacks is chocolate bar which is hazelnut flavored and I think it can help me to gain the energy and also review the happiness emotions which is a lot of sweets and I think it's very stressful and feel happiness.

✓ My favorite snack is a chocolate bar which is hazelnut flavored, and I think it can help me gain energy and also revive happy emotions. It has a lot of sweets, and I think it's very satisfying and makes me feel happy.

'Favorite snacks' should be singular 'favorite snack' to agree with 'is a chocolate bar'. 'Review the happiness emotions' is incorrect; 'revive happy emotions' is appropriate. Also, 'feel happiness' should be 'feel happy'. The sentence was also restructured for clarity and correctness.