Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using simpler and more direct language. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "release my chest." Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed. This habit started when I was a child because snacks remind me of happy memories. Eating them helps me feel relaxed and comforted.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and pronunciation errors (e.g., "snakes" should be "snacks"). Use linking words like "however" to contrast past and present. Be more specific about why some snacks are healthy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy nowadays. However, in the past, snacks were often fried in oil, which is unhealthy. Now, there are healthier options like dried fruits and nuts that provide good nutrients.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using correct tense and clearer expressions. Avoid repeating words like "always" and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, explain why you liked those flavors specifically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I enjoyed their sweet and spicy flavors. These tastes were very appealing to me and made snacking enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Use clearer and more natural language. Avoid repeating words and incorrect terms like "snakes" instead of "snacks." Explain why you like crispy snacks using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I like eating snacks like chips and fries because I enjoy their crispy texture. Also, the crunching sound makes eating them more satisfying and enjoyable for me.

× I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed because actually I love eating snacks when I was a child, so every time now I eat the snacks, it can help me to record the memory of my childhood which can release my chest.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed because actually I loved eating snacks when I was a child, so every time now I eat snacks, it helps me to recall the memory of my childhood which can relieve my chest.

The verb 'love' should be in the past tense 'loved' to match the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also, 'record the memory' is better expressed as 'recall the memory' for clarity. 'Release my chest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve my chest' meaning to ease discomfort.

× Maybe in the previous period the snacks are always made by frying with the oil, which is not healthy.

✓ Maybe in the previous period, snacks were always made by frying with oil, which is not healthy.

The plural noun 'snacks' should not have 'the' before it unless specifying particular snacks. Also, 'are' should be changed to past tense 'were' to match 'previous period'. 'Frying with the oil' should be 'frying with oil' as 'oil' is uncountable here.

× But nowadays snakes are always have the more options such as the dried fruit or nuts which is healthy for us.

✓ But nowadays snacks always have more options such as dried fruit or nuts which are healthy for us.

'Snakes' is a typo; it should be 'snacks'. 'Always have' is correct for plural subject. 'The more options' should be 'more options' without 'the'. 'Dried fruit or nuts' are plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× Yes, when I was young, I always eat snacks because the snacks always had very delicious flavors such as sweet or spicy, and this is very charming for me.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I always ate snacks because the snacks always had very delicious flavors such as sweet or spicy, and this was very charming for me.

Since the time frame is past ('when I was young'), the verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate'. Also, 'this is' should be 'this was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Actually, I like to eat the snacks such as the chips and the fries because I love the sense of the crispy crunch.

✓ Actually, I like to eat snacks such as chips and fries because I love the sense of crispy crunch.

'The snacks' is unnecessary; 'snacks' is general and plural without 'the'. Similarly, 'the chips and the fries' should be 'chips and fries' without 'the'. 'The crispy crunch' should be 'crispy crunch' as a general sensation.

× Such as yes, I really enjoy the sound while eating the chips and fries and other crispy snakes.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy the sound while eating chips, fries, and other crispy snacks.

'Such as yes' is incorrect and removed for clarity. 'The chips and fries' should be 'chips and fries' without 'the'. 'Snakes' is a typo and should be 'snacks'.