Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应直接回答问题，说明通常什么时候吃零食，并避免重复和语法错误。可以用更自然的表达方式，并且控制答案长度在5句以内。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, especially on weekends. I like to buy sweet treats from the shop because they help me relax and feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答时应更清晰地表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以具体说明为什么零食不健康。

Ví dụ: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat. Therefore, I try to eat them only when I feel stressed, and I plan to reduce my snack intake in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法和时态的正确使用，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。可以具体描述喜欢的零食种类。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. My grandparents usually bought me sweets because they believed it would make me happy and comfort me.

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和不自然的表达。可以更具体地描述喜欢的零食和原因。

Ví dụ: My favorite snacks are milk cakes, especially mousse cakes. I enjoy them because they taste delicious and contain milk, which I like to drink.

× Yes, I'm really glad to eat this very delicious food and I think eat some sweet food that makes me feel very happy and can help me relax myself.

✓ Yes, I'm really glad to eat this very delicious food and I think eating some sweet food makes me feel very happy and can help me relax myself.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（动词+ing）来表示动作的进行或习惯，这里"think eat"应改为"think eating"。

× And in weekend I prefer to go to the shop to buy some very beautiful and delicious snacks to eat.

✓ And on weekends I prefer to go to the shop to buy some very beautiful and delicious snacks to eat.

“weekend”表示“周末”，前面应加介词“on”，且习惯用复数形式“weekends”表示经常性的动作。

× Well, actually I think it may be not very good for our health treatment.

✓ Well, actually I think it may not be very good for our health.

“may be not”语序不正确，应改为“may not be”。另外，“health treatment”用词不当，通常说“health”表示健康。

× Most snacks we can just eat a few snacks when we feel very sad or have lots of stress to relax.

✓ We can just eat a few snacks when we feel very sad or have lots of stress to relax.

“Most snacks”与后文重复且不通顺，应去掉。

× So I may try my best to eat fewer snacks in the future.

✓ So I will try my best to eat fewer snacks in the future.

表达将来意图时，使用“will”更合适，表示决心或计划。

× Yes actually and when I was a child I ate a lot of snacks and my grandparent always bought some snacks for me.

✓ Yes actually and when I was a child I ate a lot of snacks and my grandparents always bought some snacks for me.

“grandparent”应为复数形式“grandparents”，表示祖父母。

× They thought this delicious food can makes me happy and help them to better comfort me.

✓ They thought this delicious food can make me happy and help them to better comfort me.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，“makes”应改为“make”。

× Milk cakes are the favorite snacks for me and especially the moose cake.

✓ Milk cakes are the favorite snacks for me, especially the mousse cake.

“moose”应为“mousse”，表示慕斯蛋糕，且句中应加逗号使句子更通顺。

× I think this food had a very good taste and because I'm very enjoy to drinking milk and I think cakes have lots of milk and their materials so I like this taste.

✓ I think this food has a very good taste because I really enjoy drinking milk and I think cakes have lots of milk and other ingredients, so I like this taste.

“had”应为现在时“has”，因为表达的是现在的感受；“I'm very enjoy to drinking milk”语法错误，应改为“I really enjoy drinking milk”；“their materials”用词不当，应为“other ingredients”。