Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“help”相关内容。

Ví dụ: I usually have snacks in the afternoon, especially cookies, because they are small but satisfying. Moreover, they help reduce my hunger between meals and keep my energy levels steady throughout the day.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数形式，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't think eating too many snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar, which can cause weight gain. In addition, many snacks have low-quality additives that are harmful to our health.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免口语填充词，且句子结构应更完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved eating snacks when I was young, especially candies. The sweetness made me very happy. However, my parents limited me to eating only one candy per day to keep me healthy.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，建议简化句子，注意单复数和冠词使用，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I'm keen on cookies because they are not too sweet and contain less sugar than other snacks. Besides, eating cookies is convenient and helps reduce my hunger, keeping my energy up before meals.

× I don't think eating too much eating snacks is very healthy because a lot because nowadays the snacks are contained a lot of sugar which made my weight gain.

✓ I don't think eating too many snacks is very healthy because nowadays snacks contain a lot of sugar which makes me gain weight.

“too much”用于不可数名词，“snacks”是可数名词复数，应该用“too many”。“a lot of”后面接可数名词复数时不加“a lot because”。“are contained”错误，应该用主动语态“contain”。“made my weight gain”时态和表达错误，改为“makes me gain weight”。

× Also the additive in the snacks are low qualities that's bad for our health.

✓ Also, the additives in the snacks are of low quality, which is bad for our health.

“additive”应为复数“additives”，与谓语“are”一致。形容词“low qualities”错误，应为“low quality”。“that's”应改为“which is”引导定语从句。

× Uh, the sugar in the candies are very sweet that's made me very satisfied.

✓ Uh, the sugar in the candies is very sweet, which makes me very satisfied.

主语“the sugar”是单数，谓语动词应为“is”。“that's made”时态和结构错误，应为“which makes”表示现在的状态。

× But my parents award me to eat too much.

✓ But my parents forbid me to eat too much.

“award”用法错误，正确表达应为“forbid”表示禁止。

× I can only eat 1 sugar when one day when I was young.

✓ I could only eat one piece of candy per day when I was young.

“1 sugar”表达不准确，应具体说明“one piece of candy”。“when one day”重复且不通顺，改为“per day”。时态与上下文一致用过去时“could”。

× The cookies are not too sweet so it contains less sugars than other snacks.

✓ The cookies are not too sweet, so they contain less sugar than other snacks.

“cookies”复数，谓语动词应为“contain”。“less sugars”错误，sugar是不可数名词，应为“less sugar”。

× Besides, the eating the cookies is very convenient and it can help me reduce my hunger that can make me energy up all the days before the meal.

✓ Besides, eating cookies is very convenient and it can help me reduce my hunger, which can give me energy throughout the day before meals.

“the eating the cookies”重复冠词，应为“eating cookies”。“make me energy up”表达错误，应为“give me energy”。“all the days before the meal”不通顺，改为“throughout the day before meals”。