Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I don't have a usual eating time for snacks, however I usually like to have one after lunch," you can say "I usually have snacks after lunch, but I don't stick to a fixed time." Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually have snacks after lunch, but I don't stick to a fixed time. Sometimes, I eat them in the afternoon when I feel hungry.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using clearer vocabulary. Instead of "it refers your energy," say "it restores your energy." Also, try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think eating healthy snacks during the day is beneficial because they restore your energy and provide essential nutrients, which help you stay active until bedtime.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by correcting tense and grammar. For example, say "there were lots of foods that I didn't eat" and "I consumed a lot of unhealthy and processed foods." Also, add linking words to connect ideas and be more specific.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, my eating habits were bad because I consumed a lot of unhealthy and processed foods. Moreover, there were many healthy foods that I didn't eat at all.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow. Instead of "I like to have some unhealthy snacks like chips and sometimes I do have healthy food like fruits," say "I enjoy eating unhealthy snacks like chips, but I also eat healthy snacks such as fruits occasionally." Use linking words to show contrast.

Ví dụ: I enjoy eating unhealthy snacks like chips; however, I also eat healthy snacks such as fruits occasionally.

× Yes, it's good to have some healthy snacks eaten during the day because it refers your energy and it provides you with the essential nutrients needed to continue your day until you sleep again.

✓ Yes, it's good to have some healthy snacks during the day because it restores your energy and provides you with the essential nutrients needed to continue your day until you sleep again.

The phrase 'snacks eaten' incorrectly uses the past participle 'eaten' where the base form 'have' should be followed directly by the noun 'snacks'. Also, 'refers your energy' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'restores' to indicate replenishing energy. The sentence should use 'restores' instead of 'refers' for clarity and correctness.

× When I was a child, my eating habits were bad and there were lots of food that I don't eat.

✓ When I was a child, my eating habits were bad and there were lots of foods that I didn't eat.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past ('When I was a child'), the verb 'don't eat' should be in past tense 'didn't eat'. Also, 'lots of food' should be 'lots of foods' to correctly refer to multiple types of food.

× I was consuming much of unhealthy food and artificially made processed food.

✓ I consumed a lot of unhealthy food and artificially made processed food.

The past continuous tense 'was consuming' is less appropriate here; simple past 'consumed' is better for habitual past actions. Also, 'much of unhealthy food' is incorrect; 'a lot of unhealthy food' is the correct quantifier for countable and uncountable nouns in this context.