Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时句子较长且有重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because there is a long gap between lunch and dinner. Especially when I have lessons, I feel hungry and need snacks to keep my energy up for studying.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但用词不够准确，且“make people obsess”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇，并补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many contain additives that can harm our bodies. Also, eating too many snacks can lead to unhealthy habits and weight gain.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并用更简洁的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: I rarely ate snacks when I was a child because my parents thought they were unhealthy and could affect my growth.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复表达，且“feel like on the moon”不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I enjoy a variety of sweet snacks, such as chocolate and cakes, because they make me feel very happy and uplift my mood.

× because since there's there is a long time between the lunch and dinner

✓ because there is a long time between lunch and dinner

句中重复使用了"there's"和"there is"，且"the lunch and dinner"中不需要定冠词"the"，应改为"lunch and dinner"。

× between the lunch and dinner

✓ between lunch and dinner

在表示一般餐食时，通常不加定冠词"the"，应直接使用"lunch"和"dinner"。

× to make me not feel hungry and have more effort to study

✓ to make me not feel hungry and have more energy to study

"have more effort"表达不准确，应该用"have more energy"表示有更多精力学习。

× there are many additives in the snacks

✓ there are many additives in snacks

"snacks"前不需要加定冠词"the"，因为这里泛指零食。

× Eating too much snacks can also make people obsess

✓ Eating too many snacks can also make people obsessed

"too much"用于不可数名词，"snacks"是可数名词，应使用"too many"；"make people obsess"应改为"make people obsessed"，形容词形式。

× I rarely eat snacks when I was a kid

✓ I rarely ate snacks when I was a kid

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去式，"eat"应改为"ate"。

× my parents prevent me from eating the snacks

✓ my parents prevented me from eating snacks

动词时态应与句子时间一致，改为过去式"prevented"；"the snacks"改为泛指"snacks"。

× They think eating snacks really they think eating snacks is really unhealthy for me

✓ They thought eating snacks was really unhealthy for me

描述过去观点时，动词应使用过去式，"think"改为"thought"，"is"改为"was"。

× and they the snacks can do harm to my body and influence my my growing up

✓ and they thought snacks could harm my body and affect my growth

句子结构混乱，重复"my"，应简化为"affect my growth"，且时态应为过去式。

× ranging from the chocolate to the cakes

✓ ranging from chocolate to cakes

在泛指食物时，不需要加定冠词"the"。