Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda zaman ifadələrini daha dəqiq istifadə edin və cümlələrinizi daha təbii edin. Məsələn, keçmişdə və indiki vəziyyəti aydın şəkildə ayırın və təkrarları aradan qaldırın.

Ví dụ: I used to enjoy eating snacks when I was a child because they made me happy. However, now I usually avoid them to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Gợi ý: Cümlənizi daha təbii və genişləndirin. Niyə zərərli olduğunu izah edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, eating snacks can have a detrimental impact on our body because they often contain unhealthy ingredients. Moreover, they can affect our mental health by causing mood swings.

Gợi ý: Təkrar ifadələrdən qaçının və cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin. Əlavə məlumat verərək cavabı zənginləşdirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because they were easily available and tasty. However, now I try to avoid them for health reasons.

Gợi ý: Cümlənizi daha təbii edin və əlavə səbəblər və ya təsvirlər əlavə edin. "Over the moon" ifadəsini kontekstə uyğun istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: I like many kinds of snacks, but my favorite are chips because they are crispy and flavorful. Eating them always makes me feel very happy.

× When I was a child, I was keen on eating snacks because it gives me a sense of happiness, gave me a sense of happiness.

✓ When I was a child, I was keen on eating snacks because it gave me a sense of happiness.

The sentence mixes present tense 'gives' with past context 'When I was a child'. The verb should be in past tense 'gave' to match the time frame of the sentence.

× In my opinion, eating snacks has a detrimental impact in our body, both physically and mentally.

✓ In my opinion, eating snacks has a detrimental impact on our body, both physically and mentally.

The correct preposition to use with 'impact' is 'on', not 'in'. 'Impact on' is the standard collocation.

× As I mentioned before, when I was a child, umm I I ate more snacks, but nowadays I don't eat snacks.

✓ As I mentioned before, when I was a child, umm I ate more snacks, but nowadays I don't eat snacks.

There is a repetition of 'I' which is a speech disfluency rather than a grammar error, but removing the repeated 'I' improves clarity.

× There are many kinds of snacks, but my favorite snacks are chips, and when eating chips I feel over the moon.

✓ There are many kinds of snacks, but my favorite snack is chips, and when eating chips I feel over the moon.

The phrase 'my favorite snacks are chips' is acceptable, but 'favorite snack is chips' is more natural since 'chips' is plural but considered a single type of snack. The singular 'snack' refers to the category, while 'chips' is plural as a specific item.