Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating when you eat snacks and why, avoiding filler words and repeated phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks between lunch and dinner because I often feel hungry and stressed at that time. To boost my energy and mood, I prefer eating light snacks like fruit or nuts.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be improved by avoiding repetition and structuring your response more logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more natural flow.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the type of snacks I choose. Generally, I try to eat healthy snacks such as apples and carrots because they provide good nutrition.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I often ate snacks at any time without a schedule. I didn't pay attention to whether they were healthy or not.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating previous points and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, check your grammar for accuracy.

Ví dụ: I prefer to avoid processed snacks like chips and sweets. Instead, I usually eat healthy snacks such as carrots and fruits because they are nutritious.

× Well to be honest I always eat snacks between lunch and dinner as those they those times I feel stressed and hungry so that in order to gain energy and feel happy I it's next suggest phantom chips and so on.

✓ Well, to be honest, I always eat snacks between lunch and dinner because at those times I feel stressed and hungry, so in order to gain energy and feel happy, I usually eat snacks like potato chips and so on.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrasing such as 'as those they those times' and 'I it's next suggest phantom chips'. The conjunction 'because' is appropriate to explain the reason for eating snacks. Also, 'phantom chips' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'potato chips' is a common snack. Adding commas improves clarity and sentence flow.

× Well, from my perspective, it depends on what kind of snacks I'm eating at that moment.

✓ Well, from my perspective, it depends on what kind of snacks I am eating at that moment.

The original sentence is mostly correct but 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' and in formal speech, expanding contractions is preferred. No preposition error here, so no correction needed. This is just a style suggestion.

× Well when I was a kid, honestly, I ate lots of snacks without assignment time and I didn't know what kind of snacks I was eating at that time and I didn't know there were nutritions or unhealthy.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, honestly, I ate lots of snacks without a set time and I didn't know what kind of snacks I was eating at that time and I didn't know whether they were nutritious or unhealthy.

The phrase 'without assignment time' is incorrect; 'without a set time' or 'without a fixed time' is appropriate. Also, 'nutritions' is incorrect because 'nutrition' is an uncountable noun; 'nutritious' is the correct adjective. The sentence also needed 'whether' to introduce the choice between 'nutritious or unhealthy'.

× Well, as I mentioned earlier, I tried to avoid the process snacks like chips, sweets so that I always try to eat healthy and full of nutrition snacks like carrots, fruits.

✓ Well, as I mentioned earlier, I try to avoid processed snacks like chips and sweets, so I always try to eat healthy and nutritious snacks like carrots and fruits.

'Process snacks' is incorrect; the correct term is 'processed snacks'. Also, 'full of nutrition snacks' is awkward; 'nutritious snacks' is better. The conjunction 'so that' is incorrectly used; 'so' is more appropriate here. Commas and conjunctions are adjusted for clarity.