Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“makes me feel step in my comfort zone”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法的正确性。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I watch TV series or movies because it helps me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和复数形式的使用，并且避免句子残缺。

Ví dụ: Of course not. I think eating snacks like biscuits and chips is unhealthy because they contain too much oil and salt, which is bad for our health.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，如“prohibited me to eat that”应为“prohibited me from eating them”。建议注意动词搭配和代词使用。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I didn't often eat snacks because my parents told me that eating them was bad for my health, so they prohibited me from eating them.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但“the TV series”表达不够准确，建议使用复数形式或具体名称。可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I like to eat chips, especially when I watch TV series, because they help me feel relaxed and comfortable.

× I will eat snacks when I watch a TV series or films because I think doing this makes me feel step in my comfort zone.

✓ I eat snacks when I watch a TV series or films because I think doing this makes me feel like I'm in my comfort zone.

这里的时间状语是现在时态，表示习惯性动作，不能用将来时"will eat"，应使用一般现在时"eat"。另外，"step in my comfort zone"表达不正确，应改为"feel like I'm in my comfort zone"。

× I will eat snacks when I watch a TV series or films because I think doing this makes me feel step in my comfort zone.

✓ I eat snacks when I watch a TV series or films because I think doing this makes me feel like I'm in my comfort zone.

"step in my comfort zone"中的"step"用法错误，正确表达应为"feel like I'm in my comfort zone"，表示"感觉处于舒适区"。

× Of course no. I think it's unhealthy for me to eat snacks like the biscuits and chips because of these are too much oil and salts.

✓ Of course not. I think it's unhealthy for me to eat snacks like biscuits and chips because they contain too much oil and salt.

"Of course no"应为"Of course not"，表示否定回答。"the biscuits and chips"中不需要定冠词"the"，应为复数名词。"because of these are"结构错误，应改为"because they contain"。"oil and salts"中"salts"应为不可数名词"salt"。

× It's bad for our.

✓ It's bad for us.

"our"是形容词性物主代词，后面应接名词，不能单独使用。此处应使用宾格代词"us"。

× When I was young I didn't often eat snacks because my parents often told me eating these are bad for my health, so they prohibited me to eat that.

✓ When I was young, I didn't often eat snacks because my parents often told me eating these was bad for my health, so they prohibited me from eating them.

"eating these are"主谓不一致，应改为"eating these was"，因为"eating"作为主语单数。"prohibited me to eat that"用法错误，正确搭配是"prohibited me from eating them"。

× When I was young I didn't often eat snacks because my parents often told me eating these are bad for my health, so they prohibited me to eat that.

✓ When I was young, I didn't often eat snacks because my parents often told me eating these was bad for my health, so they prohibited me from eating them.

"these"和"that"指代不明确且不一致，应统一使用复数形式"these"或"them"。

× I like to eat chips, especially when I watch the TV series because it can make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I like to eat chips, especially when I watch TV series because they can make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

"the TV series"不需要定冠词，且"series"为复数，代词应使用复数"they"，而非单数"it"。