Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structure and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, mention the time first, then the types of snacks you enjoy, and finish with a reason or additional detail.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 4 or 5 PM. I like to have pakodas and samosas with a cup of chai because they are tasty and satisfying.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit contradictory and unclear. Make sure to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically and avoid repeating the same points.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks like pakoras and samosas is healthy because they are fried and oily. Instead, I prefer eating nuts such as almonds and pistachios, which are much better for my health.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing because of tense inconsistency and unclear information. Make sure to answer the question directly using the past tense when talking about your childhood. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not answer the question.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I usually enjoyed peanuts, pistachios, and almonds as my afternoon snacks.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I do like to eat' and be more specific about the snacks you enjoy. Also, avoid vague terms like 'etcetera' and instead list a few examples clearly. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: I like to eat pistachios, almonds, and hazelnuts, as well as some salty snacks. For example, I often enjoy Lays potato chips, potato sticks, and cheese balls.

× I usually eat snacks in afternoon at 4:00 PM or five PM

✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon at 4:00 PM or 5 PM

The phrase 'in afternoon' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, we say 'in the afternoon' to refer to that part of the day. Also, 'five PM' should be written as '5 PM' for consistency and clarity.

× I do like to eat like pakodas, samosas and a cup of Chai with them.

✓ I do like to eat pakodas, samosas, and have a cup of chai with them.

The phrase 'eat like pakodas' is incorrect because 'like' is unnecessary here and causes confusion. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'like' and adding 'have' before 'a cup of chai' to correctly express the action.

× That's my eating snacks.

✓ That's how I eat snacks.

The original sentence 'That's my eating snacks' is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence 'That's how I eat snacks' clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× No I don't think so. It's healthy to eat snacks like pakoras and samosa.

✓ No, I don't think so. It's not healthy to eat snacks like pakoras and samosas.

The original sentence contradicts the intended meaning. The student likely meant that eating pakoras and samosas is unhealthy. Also, 'samosa' should be plural 'samosas' to match 'pakoras'.

× Instead we should eat nuts because they are healthier and eating pakoras and samosa are unhealthy for our health.

✓ Instead, we should eat nuts because they are healthier, and eating pakoras and samosas is unhealthy for our health.

A comma is needed after 'Instead' to separate the introductory word. Also, 'samosa' should be plural 'samosas'. The verb 'are' should be 'is' because 'eating pakoras and samosas' is a singular activity.

× So I will not recommend an unhealthy snacks eating in afternoon.

✓ So I will not recommend eating unhealthy snacks in the afternoon.

The phrase 'an unhealthy snacks eating' is incorrect. 'Snacks' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'an'. The correct structure is 'eating unhealthy snacks'. Also, 'in afternoon' should be 'in the afternoon'.

× Yes, I do like to eat snacks when I was young and I'm young right now, I'm not an adult, so I usually eat peanuts, pistachio and almonds in my afternoon snacks and I like them very much in afternoon.

✓ Yes, I liked to eat snacks when I was young, and I'm young right now; I'm not an adult. I usually eat peanuts, pistachios, and almonds in my afternoon snacks, and I like them very much in the afternoon.

The phrase 'I do like to eat snacks when I was young' mixes present tense 'do like' with past time 'when I was young'. It should be past tense 'liked'. Also, 'pistachio' should be plural 'pistachios'. Commas and semicolons improve sentence clarity. 'In afternoon' should be 'in the afternoon'.

× I do like to eat pistachios, almonds and hazelnuts and some salty food.

✓ I do like to eat pistachios, almonds, hazelnuts, and some salty food.

Commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity.

× I do like to eat Lays.

✓ I do like to eat Lays chips.

'Lays' alone is a brand name; adding 'chips' clarifies the meaning.

× It's a snack in my country and I usually like to eat potato sticks, cheese balls and etcetera.

✓ It's a snack in my country, and I usually like to eat potato sticks, cheese balls, etc.

'Etcetera' should be abbreviated as 'etc.' and preceded by a comma. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.