Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit short and could be more natural. Try to add more details about the time or situation when you eat snacks, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon with my high tea because it helps me feel refreshed and energized before dinner.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical errors. Please try to express your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your opinion.

Ví dụ: I think baked snacks are healthier than fried ones because they contain less oil. Moreover, I go to the gym regularly to stay fit and balance my diet.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and could be more detailed. Try to use past tense consistently and add more specific information about the snacks or the situation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks in the evening when I came home from school. My mom usually gave me some as a reward for finishing my homework.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too brief and unclear. Please provide more details and correct the name of the snack if possible. Also, try to explain why you like those snacks to make your answer more interesting.

Ví dụ: I usually like to eat fritters because they are crispy and tasty. I also enjoy drinking buttermilk, which is refreshing and helps with digestion.

× But so I also joined gym so that I never faced any trouble due to eating snacks.

✓ So I also joined the gym so that I would never face any trouble due to eating snacks.

The original sentence uses 'But so' incorrectly as a conjunction. 'But' and 'so' serve different purposes and should not be combined. Also, 'joined gym' lacks the definite article 'the'. The tense 'never faced' should be changed to 'would never face' to express future intention or purpose. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I remember my mom always gives me snacks in the evening when I came from school and she also gave me some as an appreciation of all.

✓ Yes, I remember my mom always gave me snacks in the evening when I came from school and she also gave me some as an appreciation of all.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, 'gives' should be changed to 'gave' to maintain past tense consistency. This correction ensures proper tense agreement in the sentence.