Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks after meals, especially in the afternoon or evening. For instance, I often crave chocolate after lunch or dinner because it satisfies my sweet tooth. However, I have realised that it has become a bit of an addiction, so I am trying to cut down on it for the sake of my health.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains several errors in vocabulary and grammar, such as confusing 'snake' with 'snack'. Also, the response lacks coherence and clarity. Try to answer directly, use correct vocabulary, and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Definitely not. Snacks are generally unhealthy, especially if eaten in large amounts, as they can harm your health. Personally, I love eating chocolate after meals, but I know this is a bad habit and I need to stop it soon.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some minor errors and awkward phrases, such as 'a chips' and 'regional part'. Try to use correct articles and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young. For example, I would frequently have chips or cookies after school because they were convenient and tasty. Snacking was a regular part of my daily routine, especially during breaks between meals.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases that do not relate to the question. Focus on answering directly with clear and relevant information. Avoid unrelated or unclear expressions, and provide specific details about your favourite snacks.

Ví dụ: Chocolate is definitely my favourite snack. I usually buy a bar of chocolate every week because I really enjoy its sweet and rich flavour.

× I usually eat snacks after meal, especially in afternoon or evening.

✓ I usually eat snacks after meals, especially in the afternoon or evening.

The phrase 'after meal' is incorrect because 'meal' should be pluralized to 'meals' to indicate any meal. Also, 'in afternoon or evening' requires the definite article 'the' before 'afternoon' and 'evening' to specify particular times of day.

× However, realized it has become a bit of an addition so I'm trying to cut down on it for my health.

✓ However, I realized it has become a bit of an addiction, so I'm trying to cut down on it for my health.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'realized'. Also, 'addition' is incorrect; the correct word is 'addiction' to express dependence on something. A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× Definitely no, snake is an unhealthy food so it is obviously will damage your health if you eat a lot of snakes.

✓ Definitely no, snacks are unhealthy foods so they will obviously damage your health if you eat a lot of snacks.

The word 'snake' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks' (plural) to refer to food items. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'snacks'. Also, 'it is obviously will damage' is incorrect; it should be 'they will obviously damage' to match the plural subject and correct verb form.

× For me, I especially love to eat chocolate. After a meal is a very bad hobby for me and I think I need to quit it really well.

✓ For me, I especially love to eat chocolate. Eating chocolate after a meal is a very bad habit for me and I think I need to quit it properly.

The phrase 'After a meal is a very bad hobby' is incorrect; it should be 'Eating chocolate after a meal is a very bad habit'. 'Hobby' is not appropriate here; 'habit' is the correct word. 'Quit it really well' is awkward; 'quit it properly' is better.

× Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young. For example, I would frequently have a chips or cookie after school because they were very convenient and tasty.

✓ Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young. For example, I would frequently have chips or a cookie after school because they were very convenient and tasty.

The phrase 'a chips' is incorrect because 'chips' is plural and does not take 'a'. The correct form is either 'chips' (plural) or 'a chip' (singular). Here, 'chips' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed. Conversely, 'cookie' is singular and correctly preceded by 'a'.

× Snacking was a regional part of my daily routine, especially during break between meal.

✓ Snacking was a regular part of my daily routine, especially during breaks between meals.

'Regional' is incorrect; the intended word is 'regular'. Also, 'during break between meal' is incorrect; it should be 'during breaks between meals' to indicate multiple breaks and meals.

× Chocolate is always my favorite snack to eat and the face of Aria The world came with the Aria.

✓ Chocolate is always my favorite snack to eat, and I also like Aria, which is a product from The World brand.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'The face of Aria The world came with the Aria' does not make sense. The correction assumes the student meant to express liking a product named Aria from The World brand. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I need to add a pack of Aria in a week in my lifetime.

✓ I need to buy a pack of Aria every week in my life.

The phrase 'add a pack of Aria in a week in my lifetime' is awkward and incorrect. 'Add' should be 'buy' or 'have'. 'In a week' should be 'every week' to indicate frequency. 'In my lifetime' is better expressed as 'in my life' for this context.