Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“usually”出现两次，且句子较简单。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: I usually have snacks in the afternoon while studying. For instance, I often enjoy chocolate or ice cream because they help me relax and recharge.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子结构简单，连接词使用不足。建议使用更多连接词和具体例子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I believe most snacks are unhealthy because they contain too much sugar. Although I enjoy chocolate and ice cream, I try to choose healthier options like fruits and milk to stay fit.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不准确，应使用过去时。句子结构较为简单，建议使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. However, my parents didn't allow me to eat them, so I usually ate some secretly when they weren't around.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，句子不够流畅。建议注意语法时态一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked chocolate and chips, but now I understand they are unhealthy. Therefore, I prefer eating fruits because they are both satisfying and good for my health.

× Yes, when I'm young I always eat snacks but my parents don't allow me to eat them so I usually eat some when they can't find.

✓ Yes, when I was young I always ate snacks but my parents didn't allow me to eat them so I usually ate some when they couldn't find.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'I'm young' 应改为 'I was young'，'always eat' 改为 'always ate'，'don't allow' 改为 'didn't allow'，'can't find' 改为 'couldn't find'。时态不一致导致表达不准确。

× When when I was a child, I like it chocolate and chips, but now I know that it's unhealthy for my for me.

✓ When I was a child, I liked chocolate and chips, but now I know that it's unhealthy for me.

描述过去的喜好时，动词应使用过去时态，'like' 应改为 'liked'。另外，'like it chocolate' 结构不正确，应去掉 'it'。多余的 'for' 也应删除。

× It's not only satisfy for me but and also it's healthy.

✓ It's not only satisfying for me but also healthy.

'not only... but also...' 是固定搭配，不能插入 'and'。'satisfy' 应改为形容词或动名词形式 'satisfying'。句子结构错误导致表达不清晰。