Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了吃零食的原因，但语法和用词有误，如"addicting"应为"addictive"，"boost"应为"boosts"。建议注意动词时态和形容词的正确使用，同时回答可以更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed or unhappy. For example, I like sweet snacks like Snickers because they are addictive and boost my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如"a lot of addictive"应为"very addictive"，"may harmful"应为"may be harmful"。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子表达观点，并提供更具体的健康影响。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they are very addictive. Eating too many snacks may be harmful and can cause high blood pressure or an increased heart rate.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，如"always eat"应为"always ate"，"my mother hit me to do that"表达不清且不合适。建议使用正确时态，避免不恰当表达，并丰富细节使回答更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks before meals when I was young. My mother didn't like this habit, but I was really attracted to snacks because they are addictive.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整，如"Chemicals like dopamine that makes me feel happy"缺少谓语。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I like to eat sweet snacks like Snickers because they make my brain feel good. This is due to chemicals like dopamine, which make me feel happy.

× It really addicting and boost my mood.

✓ It is really addicting and boosts my mood.

这里缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整；另外，主语是第三人称单数，动词“boost”应加-s变为“boosts”。

× No actually it's a lot of addictive and eating too much may harmful.

✓ No, actually it's very addictive and eating too much may be harmful.

“a lot of addictive”用法错误，应该用副词“very”修饰形容词“addictive”；“may harmful”缺少动词“be”，应为“may be harmful”。

× Yes, I always eat snacks even before the meal and my mother hit me to do that.

✓ Yes, I always ate snacks even before the meal and my mother hit me for doing that.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时“ate”；“hit me to do that”表达不准确，改为“hit me for doing that”更符合习惯用法。

× So I'm really attracted by the snacks.

✓ So I'm really attracted to the snacks.

“attracted”后应接介词“to”表示被吸引，原句介词使用错误。

× Chemicals like dopamine that makes me feel happy.

✓ Chemicals like dopamine make me feel happy.

主语“Chemicals”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，且原句缺少主谓结构，需调整。