Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“choose to eating”应为“choose to eat”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且回答应更具体，说明具体什么时候吃零食。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks once or twice a week, mostly in the afternoon when I feel a bit hungry between meals.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为笼统，语法和表达不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，表达观点时更连贯，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because many snacks contain high amounts of fat and sugar, which can lead to weight gain and increase the risk of diseases like diabetes and heart problems.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I didn't eat many snacks when I was young because my mother encouraged me to eat healthy food. Sometimes, I would secretly buy snacks from the supermarket without her knowing.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“clips”应为“chips”，“sugars”应为“candies”，且“Just sweaty”表达不清楚。建议使用正确的词汇，并且表达更连贯自然。

Ví dụ: I like to eat chips, chocolates, and candies. These snacks make me feel happy and satisfied when I eat them.

× I really like snacks and I'm losing weight right now so I choose to eating a snack monthly.

✓ I really like snacks and I'm losing weight right now so I choose to eat a snack monthly.

动词 choose 后面应接动词原形 eat，而不是动名词 eating。动词不定式和动名词的用法不同，这里应使用不定式。

× Now one thing is not healthy, it contains a lot of fat sugar which will make you fat.

✓ Now one thing is not healthy, it contains a lot of fat and sugar which will make you fat.

fat sugar 是两个不同的名词，缺少连接词 and，导致表达不清楚。应加上 and 连接两个名词。

× If you eat too many snacks, maybe you will have a potential to have disease like cardiovascular disease, diabetes.

✓ If you eat too many snacks, maybe you will have the potential to have diseases like cardiovascular disease and diabetes.

表达中缺少定冠词 the，且 disease 应为复数 diseases，因为提到了多种疾病。还应加 and 连接疾病名称。

× Not too much when I was young because my mother unlimited me eating a healthy food, so sometimes just I try to buy some in my supermarket but my mother didn't know about it.

✓ Not too much when I was young because my mother didn't allow me to eat unhealthy food, so sometimes I just tried to buy some in the supermarket but my mother didn't know about it.

unlimited 用法错误，应使用 allow；后面动词应为不定式 to eat；healthy food 应改为 unhealthy food 表达母亲限制吃不健康食物；时态应与过去时间一致。

× Well, I like to eat clips, chocolates, sugars, everything. Just sweaty.

✓ Well, I like to eat chips, chocolates, sugar, everything. Just sweet.

clips 应为 chips（薯片）；sugars 应为 sugar（不可数名词）；sweaty 是形容词“多汗的”，应改为 sweet（甜的）表达口感。