Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks during my school breaks because I have limited time between lessons. For instance, I often grab a quick snack to keep my energy up throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and does not fully address the question. Make sure to provide a complete response with your opinion and supporting details. Use linking words to explain your viewpoint clearly.

Ví dụ: From my point of view, eating snacks can be healthy if you choose nutritious options like fruits or nuts. However, eating too many sugary snacks might be harmful to health.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I ate snacks occasionally because my parents were strict about my diet. Therefore, I usually had a balanced diet and didn't eat many snacks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by avoiding informal or unclear expressions like "menstruation face". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer sweet snacks, such as chocolate or protein bars. However, sometimes I enjoy salty or sour snacks depending on my mood.

× I used to eat snacks every single day because I because of the lack of time and limitations that I have to.

✓ I used to eat snacks every single day because of the lack of time and the limitations that I have.

The sentence contains a repetition ('because I because') and an incomplete phrase ('limitations that I have to'). The corrected sentence removes the repetition and completes the phrase to make it grammatically correct and clear.

× Because of my lessons and so I I ate them during my school breaks or during the comment days.

✓ Because of my lessons, I ate them during my school breaks or during the common days.

The original sentence has repetition ('I I') and an unclear phrase ('comment days'). The correction removes repetition and replaces 'comment days' with 'common days' assuming it means regular school days, improving clarity and grammar.

× From my point of view, I think that eating snacks.

✓ From my point of view, I think that eating snacks is good.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement after 'eating snacks'. The correction completes the sentence by adding 'is good' to make it a complete thought.

× I used to eat a numerous amount of snacks but not every single day because my parents were quite strict in this question.

✓ I used to eat a numerous number of snacks but not every single day because my parents were quite strict about this matter.

'Amount' is used for uncountable nouns, but 'snacks' are countable, so 'number' is correct. Also, 'strict in this question' is incorrect; 'strict about this matter' is the proper phrase.

× So they controlled my diet and actually I had balanced diet so that's why I hadn't It's next that much.

✓ So they controlled my diet and actually I had a balanced diet, so that's why I didn't eat snacks that much.

The original sentence has a typo ('hadn't It's next') and lacks the article 'a' before 'balanced diet'. The correction fixes the typo, adds the article, and clarifies the meaning with proper past tense usage.