Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
Am I evil? Is a it's like a other Monday, Saturday and Sunday because. They are they a E achoo I know tired. I realized name should I wanna eat neck?
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
Uhm, I think is. Is Magnum R is unhealthy because it's like a it's like make me fat, Anna, make me a harbor fever.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
Yes, I work when I when I was young, I Izunia is night because it's very jammy Ann and it made me made me a relaxed Anna. OK.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
I'll ask. Mike has spicy hot spicy. It made me a relaxed Anna. When I uh, feels spicy, I feeling a enjoying moment.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, gây khó hiểu cho người nghe. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.
Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks on weekends, especially on Saturday and Sunday, because I feel more relaxed and have more free time then.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I think eating snacks like Magnum ice cream is unhealthy because it can make me gain weight and sometimes cause stomach discomfort.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks at night when I was young because they were tasty and helped me feel relaxed.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về loại đồ ăn vặt bạn thích và lý do bạn thích chúng.
Ví dụ: I like to eat spicy snacks because they help me feel relaxed and I enjoy the spicy flavor.
× Am I evil? Is a it's like a other Monday, Saturday and Sunday because.
✓ I usually eat snacks on other days like Monday, Saturday, and Sunday.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that answers the question appropriately.
× They are they a E achoo I know tired.
✓ I am usually tired then.
The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear words. The correction replaces unclear parts with a clear statement using the correct pronoun 'I'.
× I realized name should I wanna eat neck?
✓ I realized I want to eat a snack.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.
× Uhm, I think is. Is Magnum R is unhealthy because it's like a it's like make me fat, Anna, make me a harbor fever.
✓ Uhm, I think it is unhealthy because it makes me fat and gives me a fever.
The original sentence has incomplete and repetitive phrases and unclear words. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.
× Yes, I work when I when I was young, I Izunia is night because it's very jammy Ann and it made me made me a relaxed Anna.
✓ Yes, I ate snacks when I was young because they were very yummy and made me feel relaxed.
The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'work' and unclear words. The correction uses past tense verbs and clear vocabulary to match the question's context.
× I'll ask. Mike has spicy hot spicy. It made me a relaxed Anna.
✓ I like spicy snacks because they make me feel relaxed.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete and clear sentence that answers the question.
× When I uh, feels spicy, I feeling a enjoying moment.
✓ When I eat spicy snacks, I feel like I am enjoying the moment.
The original sentence misuses verb forms and pronouns. The correction uses correct verb forms and pronouns to express the intended meaning clearly.