Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas atau salah pengucapan. Misalnya, jelaskan waktu dan situasi makan camilan dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dan mudah dipahami.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I feel bored, especially while working in the office. I keep my snacks on my desk so they are easy to reach during work.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan spesifik dalam menjelaskan jenis camilan sehat dan tidak sehat.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the type of snacks you choose. For example, vegetable chips are healthier than sweet snacks like cookies or candies.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki kelancaran dan struktur kalimat. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Jelaskan perubahan kebiasaan makan dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan teratur.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young because I didn't pay much attention to what I ate. However, now I am more careful in choosing my food.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan preferensi dengan jelas dan hindari kesalahan kata.

Ví dụ: I prefer savory snacks such as potato chips and French fries because I am not a sweet tooth. I don't really like eating cakes or cookies.

× Are usually it's neck when I feel bored.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I feel bored.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. 'Are usually it's neck' is not a correct phrase. The correct sentence should start with the subject 'I' followed by the adverb 'usually' and the verb 'eat'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× So when I was. Add office.

✓ So when I was at the office.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'Add office'. The correct preposition 'at' should be used before 'the office' to indicate location. Completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually put my snack on my desk so it's easily to eat when I'm was working.

✓ I usually put my snack on my desk so it's easy to eat when I'm working.

The adverb 'easily' is incorrectly used; the adjective 'easy' should be used to describe 'to eat'. Also, 'I'm was working' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm working' to maintain present continuous tense. This correction fixes adverb/adjective misuse and tense inconsistency.

× I think it's depends on what kind of snacks do you choose to eat.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of snacks you choose to eat.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect; 'it depends' is correct without 'is'. Also, in indirect questions, the auxiliary 'do' is omitted, so 'do you choose' should be 'you choose'. This correction addresses modal verb misuse and sentence structure.

× I think there is kind of category of snacks that more healthy which is like for chips or like vegetables chips rather than like just a sweet or like any kind of unhealthy.

✓ I think there is a kind of category of snacks that are healthier, like chips or vegetable chips, rather than sweets or any kind of unhealthy snacks.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'there is kind of category' should be 'there is a kind of category'; 'that more healthy' should be 'that are healthier'; 'vegetables chips' should be 'vegetable chips'; 'just a sweet' should be 'sweets'. These corrections fix number agreement and improve clarity.

× Yes, I used to. Eat snacks quite often when I was young because at the time like I didn't really care about what kind of food that I ate.

✓ Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young because at that time I didn't really care about what kind of food I ate.

The original sentence incorrectly splits 'used to' and 'eat' into two sentences. Also, 'at the time like' is awkward; 'at that time' is better. 'What kind of food that I ate' should be 'what kind of food I ate' without 'that'. These corrections improve sentence structure and tense usage.

× So I think right now like I'm becoming more choosing the food.

✓ So I think right now I'm becoming more selective about the food I choose.

The phrase 'more choosing the food' is incorrect. 'More selective about the food I choose' is a better expression. Also, 'like' is unnecessary filler and can be omitted. This correction improves pronoun use and sentence clarity.

× I like to eat savory snacks which is like potato chips, French fries are any food that savory rather than sweet because I think I am not a sweet tooth an I don't really like to eat like cakes or cookies.

✓ I like to eat savory snacks such as potato chips, French fries, or any savory food rather than sweet ones because I think I am not a sweet tooth and I don't really like to eat cakes or cookies.

The original sentence has pronoun and conjunction errors: 'which is like' should be 'such as'; 'are any food that savory' should be 'or any savory food'; 'an' should be 'and'; unnecessary 'like' before 'cakes or cookies' should be removed. These corrections improve pronoun use, conjunctions, and sentence clarity.