Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with "I usually eat snacks occasionally when I go out with my friends." Then add a specific example to support your answer.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks occasionally when I go out with my friends. For instance, last week we shared some fruit snacks about 30 minutes before dinner, and we really enjoyed that time together.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion and explain your reasoning with specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague or incomplete sentences. For example, say "I don't think eating snacks often is healthy because it can lead to weight gain. However, choosing healthy snacks like bananas is better."

Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks often is healthy because it can lead to weight gain and other health problems. However, choosing healthy snacks like bananas or nuts is a better option for maintaining good health.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, then explain with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "When I was young, I ate snacks often because I didn't know much about healthy eating. I usually chose junk food like Lays chips, but now I prefer healthier options."

Ví dụ: When I was young, I ate snacks very often because I didn't know much about healthy eating. I usually chose junk food like Lays chips. However, now I prefer healthier snacks like fruit or nuts.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples of snacks you like. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I prefer healthy snacks because I'm health conscious. For instance, I like protein bars and banana chips because they are nutritious."

Ví dụ: I prefer healthy snacks because I'm health conscious. For instance, I like protein bars and banana chips since they provide good nutrition without too much sugar or fat.

× Notice I'm very health conscience so I will I prefer to discuss next occasionally when I go out in so with my friends.

✓ Notice I'm very health conscious so I prefer to eat snacks occasionally when I go out with my friends.

The phrase 'health conscience' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'health conscious' to describe someone aware of health. Also, 'discuss next' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'eat snacks' fits the context better. The sentence structure was also corrected for clarity.

× I remember last time I it's next 30 minutes before one of my best friend buddy so we enjoyed a lot on that day.

✓ I remember last time I ate snacks 30 minutes before meeting one of my best friends, so we enjoyed a lot that day.

The phrase 'it's next 30 minutes before' is incorrect; the past tense 'ate' is needed to describe the action. 'Best friend buddy' is redundant; 'best friends' suffices. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× No, I don't recommend to eat snacks to anyone as I'm also the health conscious person I know eating snacks can be very often can be a bad thing.

✓ No, I don't recommend eating snacks to anyone as I'm also a health conscious person. I know eating snacks very often can be a bad thing.

The verb 'recommend' is followed by a gerund ('eating'), not an infinitive ('to eat'). Also, 'the health conscious person' should be 'a health conscious person' as it is not specific. The sentence was split for clarity.

× It affected adversely. A person, human being, alive. They can tend towards healthy options.

✓ It affects a person adversely. People tend to choose healthy options.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'It affected adversely' lacks a clear subject and tense agreement. 'A person, human being, alive' is redundant and unclear. Using 'people' as a plural pronoun and present tense 'affects' fits better.

× Now we have a lot of. Banana.

✓ Now we have a lot of bananas.

The sentence is incomplete and 'banana' should be plural 'bananas' to match 'a lot of'. The period after 'of' is incorrect.

× When I was a young. I can see you I. It's next very often because that time I don't know and I don't have that much knowledge about the health and the healthier option.

✓ When I was young, I ate snacks very often because at that time I didn't know and didn't have much knowledge about health and healthier options.

'When I was a young' should be 'When I was young' without 'a'. 'I can see you I' is unclear and removed. 'It's next very often' is incorrect; 'ate snacks very often' is appropriate past tense. 'Don't know' and 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't know' and 'didn't have'.

× So I more towards around the junk food, the Lays chips.

✓ So I leaned more towards junk food, like Lays chips.

'More towards around' is incorrect; 'leaned more towards' is the correct phrase. 'The Lays chips' should be 'Lays chips' without 'the'.

× But now I found.

✓ But now I have found healthier options.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'have found healthier options' completes the thought and fits the context.

× As I told I'm health conscious person so I usually don't prefer junk food snacks but now I find the healthy snacks in the market there's loads of snacks available which is healthier like them protein bar, banana chips, I will prefer those.

✓ As I said, I'm a health conscious person, so I usually don't prefer junk food snacks. But now I find healthy snacks in the market; there are loads of snacks available which are healthier, like protein bars and banana chips. I prefer those.

'As I told' should be 'As I said'. 'I'm health conscious person' needs an article 'a'. 'There's loads of snacks' should be 'there are loads of snacks' to agree in number. 'Which is healthier' should be 'which are healthier' to agree with plural 'snacks'. 'Them protein bar' is incorrect; 'protein bars' is correct plural form.