Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks during my free time or when my kids are at home. Although I know snacks are not the healthiest option, I sometimes eat junk food to satisfy my hunger.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and concise sentences with correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same examples. Be specific about why some snacks are healthier than others.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy. However, some snacks like banana chips are less processed and better options compared to junk food.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence. Use correct grammar and avoid unclear phrases. Provide specific examples and explain how your habits have changed using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks like chips and chocolates when I was a child to satisfy my hunger. However, I have changed my habits and now I try to eat healthier foods.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague or incomplete sentences. Be specific about your favorite snacks and your opinion on snack consumption.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I like to eat snacks such as chips, chocolate, and sometimes Indian sweets, which are considered natural. However, I believe people should not eat too many snacks regularly because it can be harmful, so I have changed my habits.

× Usually feed snacks in my free time or when kids are there in my house.

✓ I usually feed snacks in my free time or when kids are at my house.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' and the verb 'feed' should be in the present tense with the subject. Also, 'are there in my house' is awkward; 'are at my house' is more natural.

× I know that it is not is not unhealthy option but to fulfill my hunger I used the simple.

✓ I know that it is not an unhealthy option, but to fulfill my hunger I used the simple way.

The phrase 'unhealthy option' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Also, 'used the simple' is incomplete; it should be 'used the simple way' or similar.

× Wave to eat those junk food.

✓ I crave to eat those junk foods.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Wave' is incorrect here; likely intended 'way' or 'crave'. Also, 'junk food' is uncountable, but 'junk foods' can be used to refer to different types.

× No, I don't think that smack isn't healthy option to eat.

✓ No, I don't think that snack is a healthy option to eat.

'Smack' is a typo for 'snack'. Also, double negation 'don't think that ... isn't' is incorrect. It should be 'don't think that snack is'.

× There are many more options such as banana chips and many more foods which are less processed.

✓ There are many options such as banana chips and other foods which are less processed.

'Many more options' and 'many more foods' is repetitive and awkward. 'Many options' and 'other foods' is clearer.

× For example, there are banana chips and many more things.

✓ For example, there are banana chips and many other things.

'Many more things' is awkward; 'many other things' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to eat a lot of snacks such as chips, chocolates, add many more to satisfy my hunger and I was some sort of.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to eat a lot of snacks such as chips, chocolates, and many more to satisfy my hunger, and I was some sort of...

'Add many more' is incorrect; it should be 'and many more'. The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete.

× Laughed with them but I have change my habit.

✓ I laughed with them, but I have changed my habit.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'laughed'. Also, 'change' should be past participle 'changed' after 'have'.

× Nowadays I used to eat snacks such as chips or chocolate or sometimes Indian sweets which are also considered as naturally.

✓ Nowadays I eat snacks such as chips, chocolate, or sometimes Indian sweets which are also considered natural.

'Used to' refers to past habits, but 'nowadays' indicates present. So 'used to' should be 'eat'. Also, 'considered as naturally' is incorrect; it should be 'considered natural'.

× And I think that opposes shall not eat that much of snacks in their regular life.

✓ And I think that people should not eat that many snacks in their regular life.

'Opposes' is incorrect here; likely meant 'people'. Also, 'that much of snacks' is incorrect; 'that many snacks' is correct for countable nouns.

× It can be harmful but. I have also changed my habits.

✓ It can be harmful, but I have also changed my habits.

The sentence is split incorrectly with a period after 'but'. It should be one sentence with a comma.