Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
I usually eat snacks when I'm not busy and have nothing to do, especially when I'm relaxing.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
Well, I don't think it's healthy to eat snacks too often, but I think sometimes snacks will cause no serious problems.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually eat snacks every day when I'm young I sometimes use Max to place the hott knew but I think it's unhealthy.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to eat the nuts and chips because I think they all have the great flavor.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入具体时间或场景,并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I take a break from work because it helps me relax and recharge.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语言不够自然,且缺少具体理由和连接词。建议明确表达观点并补充原因,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks frequently is healthy because it can lead to weight gain; however, having them occasionally shouldn't cause serious problems.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,且缺少具体细节。建议简化句子结构,明确表达过去的习惯,并避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat snacks every day when I was young, but I knew it was unhealthy.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了喜好,但用词不够准确,且缺少具体描述。建议使用更准确的词汇,并补充具体原因或描述。
Ví dụ: I like eating nuts and chips because they have a delicious taste and are easy to snack on.
× Yes, I usually eat snacks every day when I'm young I sometimes use Max to place the hott knew but I think it's unhealthy.
✓ Yes, I usually ate snacks every day when I was young. I sometimes used Max to place the hot new, but I think it's unhealthy.
句子中描述过去的习惯动作,应使用一般过去时,因此将 'eat' 改为 'ate','I'm young' 改为 'I was young','use' 改为 'used'。此外,原句中存在拼写错误和句子结构混乱,建议分句表达。
× Well, I prefer to eat the nuts and chips because I think they all have the great flavor.
✓ Well, I prefer to eat nuts and chips because I think they all have great flavor.
在英语中,复数名词前通常不加定冠词 'the',除非特指某些特定的坚果和薯片。'the great flavor' 中的 'the' 也不合适,应去掉。这样表达更自然。