Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
I really is snake in the evening but I shouted it everyday. I eat in once a week and.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
I think eating a snake is not healthy for me so I I usually eat once a way to avoid to avoid eating too much sugar and stay at more healthy.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I often a snake when I was young because. Because at this moment I was not very about healthy, but now I know about health is very important for us, so I avoid eating snake.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
I like to eat popcorn as a snake will cause a red delicious and it has variety of choices of favorite that you can choose. Full an I think popcorn is very. Good when watching on TV.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to answer the question directly with clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say when you usually eat snacks and how often, in a clear way.
Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the evening, but only once a week. I try not to eat snacks every day to stay healthy.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Make sure to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.
Ví dụ: I think eating snacks is not very healthy for me. Therefore, I usually eat snacks only once a week to avoid consuming too much sugar and to stay healthier.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary related to health. Try to be more specific about your habits in the past and now.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I did not know much about health. However, now I understand that health is very important, so I try to avoid eating snacks.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Use clear and correct vocabulary to describe your favourite snacks. Explain why you like them with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ví dụ: I like to eat popcorn as a snack because it tastes delicious and comes in many flavours. I think popcorn is a great snack to enjoy while watching TV.
× I really is snake in the evening but I shouted it everyday.
✓ I really eat snacks in the evening but I eat them every day.
The original sentence has singular and plural confusion with 'snake' instead of 'snacks' and incorrect verb 'is' instead of 'eat'. Also, 'shouted' is incorrect; it should be 'eat'. The correction uses the plural noun 'snacks' and the correct verb 'eat' to match the subject and meaning.
× I shouted it everyday.
✓ I ate them every day.
The verb 'shouted' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to say 'ate'. The past tense of 'eat' is 'ate'. Also, 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when referring to frequency.
× I eat in once a week and.
✓ I eat them once a week.
The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect structure. 'Eat in' is incorrect; it should be 'eat them'. The sentence should be complete and clear.
× I think eating a snake is not healthy for me so I I usually eat once a way to avoid to avoid eating too much sugar and stay at more healthy.
✓ I think eating snacks is not healthy for me so I usually eat them once a week to avoid eating too much sugar and stay healthier.
'Snake' should be 'snacks' (plural). 'Eat once a way' is incorrect; it should be 'eat them once a week'. 'Stay at more healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'stay healthier'. The sentence is corrected for plural nouns, verb usage, and clarity.
× Yes, of course I often a snake when I was young because.
✓ Yes, of course I often ate snacks when I was young because.
The verb 'a snake' is incorrect; it should be 'ate snacks'. The past tense 'ate' matches the past time 'when I was young'.
× Because at this moment I was not very about healthy, but now I know about health is very important for us, so I avoid eating snake.
✓ Because at that time I was not very aware about health, but now I know health is very important for us, so I avoid eating snacks.
'At this moment' should be 'at that time' to refer to the past. 'Not very about healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'not very aware about health'. 'Eating snake' should be 'eating snacks' (plural). The sentence is corrected for pronoun use and clarity.
× I like to eat popcorn as a snake will cause a red delicious and it has variety of choices of favorite that you can choose.
✓ I like to eat popcorn as a snack; it is really delicious and has a variety of flavors that you can choose from.
'Snake' should be 'snack'. 'Red delicious' is likely a mishearing of 'really delicious'. 'Variety of choices of favorite' is awkward; corrected to 'variety of flavors'. The sentence is corrected for plural nouns and clarity.
× Full an I think popcorn is very. Good when watching on TV.
✓ Also, I think popcorn is very good when watching TV.
The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'Full an' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'Also'. 'Watching on TV' should be 'watching TV'. The sentence is corrected for structure and clarity.