Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct sentence structure and avoiding repetition. Start with a direct response, then add a reason or example. For instance, say when you usually eat snacks and why you prefer your mother's snacks.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I have a break. I prefer the snacks my mother prepares because they taste delicious and are homemade.

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear and concise opinion with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid unclear phrases and try to use relevant vocabulary about health and diet.

Ví dụ: I don't think eating too many snacks is healthy because most snacks are deep-fried and contain a lot of oil. A balanced diet with proper portions is better for maintaining good health.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'but' and 'now' to show contrast.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I often ate many snacks because I didn't know they could be unhealthy. But now, I understand the negative effects and try to avoid eating too many snacks. My parents also advised me to limit my snack intake.

Gợi ý: Be more specific and clear about the snacks you like and dislike. Explain your reasons logically and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors.

Ví dụ: I like to eat snacks made with bananas and coconut oil because they are healthier. However, I avoid snacks made with palm oil or sunflower oil since I believe they can cause skin problems like pimples.

× I like I want snacks whenever I have a T and mostly I like to prefer the snacks prepared by my mother is one of the most delicious things are in my meal.

✓ I like to have snacks whenever I have tea, and mostly I prefer the snacks prepared by my mother because they are some of the most delicious things in my meal.

The original sentence incorrectly uses conjunctions and has awkward phrasing. 'I like I want snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to have snacks'. Also, 'and mostly I like to prefer' is redundant; 'mostly I prefer' is sufficient. The phrase 'is one of the most delicious things are in my meal' is grammatically incorrect and should be corrected to 'because they are some of the most delicious things in my meal.' Proper conjunctions and sentence structure improve clarity and correctness.

× I think it's not a healthy way of eating too much of snacks in other meal as it's made-up of deep deep.

✓ I think it's not healthy to eat too many snacks between meals as they are made by deep frying.

The phrase 'too much of snacks' is incorrect because 'snacks' is countable, so 'too many snacks' is correct. Also, 'in other meal' should be 'between meals' to express the correct time frame. 'Made-up of deep deep' is unclear and should be 'made by deep frying' to correctly describe the cooking method.

× It's a deep fry.

✓ They are deep-fried.

'It's a deep fry' is incorrect because 'deep fry' is a verb or a cooking method, not a noun. The correct adjective form is 'deep-fried' to describe the snacks. Also, 'they' is used to refer to plural snacks.

× Using too much of oils and you having too much of fire is not good for a World Health.

✓ Using too much oil and having too much fat is not good for world health.

'Too much of oils' is incorrect; 'oil' is uncountable, so 'too much oil' is correct. 'Having too much of fire' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement; it should be 'having too much fat.' Also, 'a World Health' is incorrect; it should be 'world health' without an article.

× Balanced diet is proper for overhead that's why we have 12 fart in a proper amount about over eating anything is not.

✓ A balanced diet is proper for overall health; that's why we should have fat in a proper amount. Overeating anything is not good.

The original sentence is confusing and contains several errors. 'Balanced diet' needs the article 'a'. 'Overhead' should be 'overall health'. '12 fart' is likely a mishearing of 'fat'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× When I was in, I didn't know more about the health issues related to or related to having more snacks.

✓ When I was young, I didn't know much about the health issues related to eating more snacks.

The phrase 'When I was in' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'When I was young'. 'Didn't know more' is incorrect; 'didn't know much' is appropriate. The repetition 'related to or related to' is redundant and should be simplified.

× But now I released the bad effect of eating too much of snacks and nowadays I avoid too much of snacks than when I was saying I used a lot of snacks without knowing the bad effect of snacks.

✓ But now I realize the bad effects of eating too many snacks, and nowadays I avoid eating too many snacks compared to when I was younger. I used to eat a lot of snacks without knowing their bad effects.

'Released' is incorrect past tense; it should be 'realize' in present tense. 'Too much of snacks' should be 'too many snacks' because 'snacks' is countable. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Even my parents advised me to not have too much of snacks.

✓ Even my parents advised me not to have too many snacks.

'Too much of snacks' is incorrect; 'too many snacks' is correct for countable nouns. The phrase 'to not have' is better expressed as 'not to have' for formal correctness.

× I like to eat careless snacks using bananas, oils and purified oil from coconut and like that, and I don't like to eat snacks make with the use of palm oil or sunflower.

✓ I like to eat healthy snacks made with bananas, oils, and purified coconut oil, and I don't like to eat snacks made with palm oil or sunflower oil.

'Careless snacks' is likely a mishearing or misuse; 'healthy snacks' fits the context better. 'Make with the use of' is awkward; 'made with' is correct. 'Sunflower' should be 'sunflower oil' for clarity.

× Oh it like that it may hardly affect to my skin and and that is the reason behind the pimple's coming in there people so easy.

✓ Because of that, it may easily affect my skin, and that is the reason behind pimples appearing on people's skin so easily.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'Oh it like that' is unclear and replaced with 'Because of that'. 'May hardly affect to my skin' is incorrect; 'may easily affect my skin' is correct. 'Pimple's coming in there people so easy' is corrected to 'pimples appearing on people's skin so easily' for clarity and grammar.