Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
Yes. I think it's like will make me happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
No, I think it is not good for healthy, but it will make me happy. I think it is also in more important for me.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
No. Actually. I ate the snacks sometimes because sometimes I will want to eat. Then. And I will eat them.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
Oh, I think my favorite snacks ****. A Taco. You know, Taco Tuesday.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够直接和具体,缺少对问题的明确回应。建议直接回答通常什么时候吃零食,并用一两句具体说明原因或情境。
Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because it helps me feel more energetic during work.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误且逻辑不够清晰。建议用更准确的句子表达观点,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar. However, I enjoy them occasionally because they make me happy.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不够流畅且重复,缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子回答,并提供具体频率或原因。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't eat snacks very often when I was young. I only ate them occasionally when I felt hungry between meals.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议明确说出喜欢的零食,并简要说明原因或场合。
Ví dụ: My favorite snack is tacos because they are delicious and I usually enjoy them on Taco Tuesday with my friends.
× Yes. I think it's like will make me happy.
✓ Yes. I think it will make me happy.
句中“it's like will make me happy”结构不正确,应该去掉“like”,直接使用“will make me happy”表示将来会让人开心。
× No, I think it is not good for healthy, but it will make me happy.
✓ No, I think it is not good for health, but it will make me happy.
“good for healthy”中“healthy”是形容词,应该用名词“health”表示健康。
× I think it is also in more important for me.
✓ I think it is also more important for me.
“in more important”中“in”多余,应去掉,正确表达为“more important”。
× Actually. I ate the snacks sometimes because sometimes I will want to eat.
✓ Actually, I ate snacks sometimes because sometimes I wanted to eat.
描述过去的动作时,应该使用过去时态,“will want”应改为过去时“wanted”。
× Then. And I will eat them.
✓ Then I would eat them.
“Then. And I will eat them.”句子断裂且“will”不符合过去语境,改为“Then I would eat them.”更连贯且时态正确。
× Oh, I think my favorite snacks ****. A Taco. You know, Taco Tuesday.
✓ Oh, I think my favorite snack is a taco. You know, Taco Tuesday.
“snacks ****. A Taco.”结构不完整且“snacks”复数与后面单数不匹配,应改为单数“snack is a taco”使句子完整通顺。