Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some language errors and unclear phrases such as "having S now" and "in wind" which affect naturalness and clarity. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the evening right after dinner and freshening up because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy snacking while watching movies or listening to music, which makes me feel calm and cozy before going to bed.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, which reduce clarity. Avoid fragments like "it makes me feel. Come eating those junk foods." Also, try to explain your opinion with reasons or examples to enrich your answer. Use linking words such as "because" or "although" to show contrast or cause.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because I usually eat junk food in the evening. However, I find it comforting and relaxing, which is why I continue to eat these snacks despite knowing they are unhealthy.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several language errors and unclear expressions such as "I'm a Relief Fund of eating snacks." Try to use simple and correct phrases to express your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words like "especially" and "because" to explain reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was younger, I often ate snacks, especially junk foods like chips and sweets, even during school hours. I think this habit is why I still enjoy eating junk food today.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains incomplete sentences and unclear phrases such as "Usually. Foods with more salt or MSG?" and "But this by says." Try to form complete sentences and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, add linking words like "however" to show contrast between your preferences and your efforts to eat healthily.

Ví dụ: I really love eating junk foods like chips and sweets, which usually contain a lot of salt or MSG. However, I am trying to eat healthier foods like fruits and vegetables once in a while.

× I like having S now so while watching movie or listening to music or reading because it helps me relax and in wind after a long day.

✓ I like having snacks now while watching a movie or listening to music or reading because it helps me relax and unwind after a long day.

The original sentence has a typo 'S now so' which should be 'snacks now'. Also, 'movie' needs an article 'a' before it. The phrase 'in wind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'unwind'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like having S now so while watching movie or listening to music or reading because it helps me relax and in wind after a long day.

✓ I like having snacks now while watching a movie or listening to music or reading because it helps me relax and unwind after a long day.

The preposition 'so' is incorrectly used and should be removed. Also, 'in wind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'unwind' without a preposition. Correct preposition use is essential for sentence clarity.

× No, definitely not, given the fact that I'm eating junk foods as light snaps in the evening.

✓ No, definitely not, given the fact that I eat junk food as light snacks in the evening.

The phrase 'I'm eating' should be in simple present 'I eat' to match habitual action. 'Junk foods' should be 'junk food' as an uncountable noun. 'Light snaps' is a typo and should be 'light snacks'. These changes correct sentence structure and word choice.

× But I find it comforting and relaxing and it makes me feel. Come eating those junk foods.

✓ But I find it comforting and relaxing, and it makes me feel calm eating those junk foods.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Come' is likely a typo for 'calm'. Combining the clauses properly and correcting the typo improves sentence clarity and structure.

× Yes, when I was a younger I'm a Relief Fund of eating snacks, specially junk foods like chips or sweets anytime of the day, even in during school hours.

✓ Yes, when I was younger, I was a big fan of eating snacks, especially junk foods like chips or sweets anytime during the day, even during school hours.

'A younger' is incorrect; it should be 'younger'. 'I'm' should be past tense 'I was' to match 'when I was younger'. 'Relief Fund' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'big fan'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'In during' is redundant; only 'during' is needed. These corrections fix tense, word choice, and preposition errors.

× Yes, when I was a younger I'm a Relief Fund of eating snacks, specially junk foods like chips or sweets anytime of the day, even in during school hours.

✓ Yes, when I was younger, I was a big fan of eating snacks, especially junk foods like chips or sweets anytime during the day, even during school hours.

The preposition 'in during' is incorrect; only 'during' should be used. Also, 'anytime of the day' is better as 'anytime during the day' for clarity.

× I really love eating junk foods like chips and sweets. Usually. Foods with more salt or MSG?

✓ I really love eating junk foods like chips and sweets. Usually, foods with more salt or MSG.

The sentence 'Usually. Foods with more salt or MSG?' is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a single sentence with proper punctuation. Also, 'junk foods' is acceptable but 'junk food' is more common as an uncountable noun.

× But this by says I'm learning to eat healthy foods like fruits and vegetables once in awhile.

✓ But these days, I'm learning to eat healthy foods like fruits and vegetables once in a while.

'This by says' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'these days'. 'Once in awhile' should be 'once in a while' as two words. These corrections improve sentence clarity and correctness.