Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
I'm sorry I don't eat snacks be 'cause I already play soccer, so it is. But for hers for by Harris. To eat so I don't eat snack for example by eating snacks my body is. Getting fat so I don't eat.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
No, no, I didn't. I didn't. I don't think so because snack don't in incurred important nutrition, but. Meet in vegetable is. Encouraged. Very important. Nutrition. So I have to eat this?
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't. I didn't eat snacks when I was young because I pray. I have prayed sucker for 15 years so. An whenever, yeah. And. I it is careful for me to eat veteran's day meal so I don't eat.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
Alright, let's clear be 'cause. It makes me cold. Then now I fear hot, so it is very good. Thanks for me to eat ice cream for example when I was young. An I. It S going with my family.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。例えば、スナックを食べない理由を具体的に述べ、理由を説明する際は論理的なつながりを持たせることが重要です。
Ví dụ: I usually don't eat snacks because I play soccer regularly. Eating snacks can make me gain weight, so I prefer to avoid them to stay healthy.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答が混乱しており、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。栄養に関する語彙を正しく使い、文をつなげる接続詞を活用してください。
Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they usually lack important nutrients. Instead, eating meat and vegetables provides essential nutrition for my body.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答が意味不明で、質問に対する答えが明確ではありません。過去の習慣について話す際は、時制に注意し、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because I was careful about my diet and preferred healthy meals.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。好きなスナックについて具体的に述べ、理由や思い出を簡潔に説明しましょう。
Ví dụ: I like to eat ice cream because it helps me cool down when it's hot. When I was young, I often enjoyed ice cream with my family.
× I'm sorry I don't eat snacks be 'cause I already play soccer, so it is.
✓ I'm sorry I don't eat snacks because I already play soccer.
'be 'cause' is an incorrect contraction and 'so it is' is unnecessary and confusing here. Use 'because' to show reason clearly.
× But for hers for by Harris.
✓ But for hers for by Harris.
This sentence is unclear and seems to misuse pronouns; it should be rephrased for clarity, but no clear grammar problem from the list applies.
× To eat so I don't eat snack for example by eating snacks my body is.
✓ So I don't eat snacks; for example, eating snacks makes my body.
Incorrect preposition usage and sentence structure make this unclear; 'by eating snacks' should be 'eating snacks' as subject.
× Getting fat so I don't eat.
✓ I get fat, so I don't eat snacks.
'Getting fat' is a present participle phrase used incorrectly; simple present 'I get fat' fits better here.
× No, no, I didn't. I didn't. I don't think so because snack don't in incurred important nutrition, but.
✓ No, I don't think so because snacks don't contain important nutrition.
'Snack don't in incurred important nutrition' is incorrect; 'snacks' plural with 'don't' and 'contain' is correct verb usage.
× Meet in vegetable is. Encouraged. Very important. Nutrition.
✓ Meat and vegetables are encouraged; they have very important nutrition.
Sentence fragments and incorrect word forms; 'meat and vegetables' plural subject with 'are' verb; 'encouraged' as adjective; 'important nutrition' as noun phrase.
× So I have to eat this?
✓ So I have to eat these?
'This' is singular; 'these' is plural to refer to meat and vegetables.
× No, I didn't. I didn't eat snacks when I was young because I pray.
✓ No, I didn't eat snacks when I was young because I prayed.
Past tense 'prayed' is needed to match 'didn't eat' and 'was young'.
× I have prayed sucker for 15 years so.
✓ I have played soccer for 15 years, so.
'Prayed sucker' is incorrect; likely meant 'played soccer'.
× An whenever, yeah. And. I it is careful for me to eat veteran's day meal so I don't eat.
✓ And whenever, yes. I am careful about what I eat, so I don't eat snacks.
Sentence fragments and unclear phrases; 'careful about what I eat' is correct expression.
× Alright, let's clear be 'cause.
✓ Alright, let's be clear because.
'clear be' is incorrect word order; correct is 'be clear'.
× It makes me cold. Then now I fear hot, so it is very good.
✓ It makes me feel cold. Now I fear heat, so it is very good.
'makes me cold' should be 'makes me feel cold'; 'fear hot' should be 'fear heat' or 'feel hot'.
× Thanks for me to eat ice cream for example when I was young.
✓ I liked to eat ice cream, for example, when I was young.
'Thanks for me to eat' is incorrect; 'I liked to eat' is correct expression.
× An I. It S going with my family.
✓ And I went with my family.
'It S going' is incorrect; past tense 'went' fits the context.