Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "there isn't really winter"), and add one specific supporting detail such as typical temperatures or seasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I live in Thailand, which is generally hot year-round. There isn't really a proper winter; temperatures usually range from about 25°C to 35°C. The hottest months are March to May, when it can feel quite humid.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid repetition and correct phrasing like "too cold" or "too hot". Stay within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer warm weather rather than very cold or very hot conditions. I dislike very cold weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable and stiff, but I enjoy warmth because it lets me be outdoors easily.

Gợi ý: Be specific and use clearer reasons. Use linking words (because, and, moreover) correctly and avoid vague phrases like "get unclean." Give one concrete example of how wet weather affects you.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather because rainy conditions make me feel sweaty and my clothes get dirty quickly. Also, wet weather often makes public places muddier and I worry about catching a cold when I'm soaked.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, then provide a specific routine and one reason. Mention frequency and an example of when you check forecasts. Correct phrasing: "I don't usually check the forecast" and "when I travel abroad I do."

Ví dụ: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I always carry an umbrella and prepare for different conditions. However, I check forecasts a few days before travelling abroad to plan what to pack and when to schedule activities.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific effects with linking words (for example, because, therefore). Correct grammar ("affects", "carbon emissions are"). Avoid trailing off; finish the thought with a brief consequence or example.

Ví dụ: I think global warming is the main driver of recent climate changes because carbon emissions are increasing. As a result, we see more extreme weather such as stronger storms and heatwaves, which harms agriculture and public health.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason and an example destination. Improve grammar ("winter countries" → "countries with winter"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition of "usually."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like visiting places with cold winters because I enjoy snow and winter activities. For example, I often travel to Europe or North America to experience skiing and sightseeing in snowy towns.

× Actually Thailand is in the hot zone so during the year there's is not winter exactly.

✓ Actually Thailand is in the hot zone, so during the year there is not exactly a winter.

The phrase 'there's is' is ungrammatical duplication of the contraction 'there's' and the verb 'is'. Use 'there is' (or 'there's') once. Also word order of 'exactly' and 'winter' is awkward; place 'exactly' before 'a winter' and include the article 'a' because 'winter' is countable here when referring to a season instance. Suggestion: use 'there is not exactly a winter' or 'there isn't really a winter'.

× Actually I prefer hot weather but not too hot.

✓ Actually I prefer hot weather, but not too hot.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; the correction only adds a comma for clarity. No tense change is needed. Note: keep present simple 'prefer' for general preferences.

× I hate cold because I feel uncomfortable when I'm getting too much cold, but for hot weather I prefer.

✓ I hate the cold because I feel uncomfortable when I get too cold, but I prefer hot weather.

'I'm getting' (present continuous) is inappropriate for a general statement about feelings; use simple present 'I get'. 'Too much cold' is unidiomatic; use 'too cold'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'cold' when speaking about the concept. The final clause 'but for hot weather I prefer' has wrong word order; use 'I prefer hot weather'.

× Definitely I choose dry weather.

✓ I definitely choose dry weather.

Placement of 'definitely' is awkward; put the adverb before the verb to modify it. The sentence itself is acceptable otherwise. Use 'I definitely prefer dry weather' for a more natural expression.

× I hate when it is wet because I get unclean easily and I feel that what can carry more germs.

✓ I hate it when it is wet because I get dirty easily and I feel that it can carry more germs.

'I hate when it is wet' needs 'it' after 'hate' for natural English: 'I hate it when...'. 'Unclean' is not the usual adjective for a person in this context; use 'dirty'. The clause 'I feel that what can carry more germs' is ungrammatical; replace 'what' with 'it' to refer to wet conditions: 'I feel that it can carry more germs'.

× Moreover, you can easily get cold.

✓ Moreover, you can easily catch a cold.

'Get cold' means become cold (temperature-wise); in context the student means become ill. The correct idiom for becoming sick is 'catch a cold'. Keep modal 'can' for possibility.

× No, I don't usually check a weather forecast because I always carry an umbrella with me so no matter what is hot or rain I still have it.

✓ No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I always carry an umbrella with me, so whether it is hot or raining I still have it.

Use 'the weather forecast' rather than 'a' when speaking generally about forecasts. The phrase 'no matter what is hot or rain' is ungrammatical; use 'whether it is hot or raining'. Use the gerund 'raining' to describe current weather condition.

× But I usually look for a weather forecast when I go abroad.

✓ But I usually check the weather forecast when I go abroad.

'Look for a weather forecast' implies searching for it; 'check the weather forecast' is the natural collocation meaning 'consult it'. Keep present simple 'usually check' for habitual action.

× I think global warming is the main issue that affect our climate because carbon emissions is now rising and it affects the environment.

✓ I think global warming is the main issue that affects our climate because carbon emissions are rising now and it affects the environment.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'that affect' should be 'that affects' to agree with singular 'global warming'. 'Carbon emissions' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Keep present simple 'are rising' for a current trend. The final clause 'it affects the environment' is fine referring to global warming.

× Yes, when I have free time, I usually take a vacation at winter countries.

✓ Yes, when I have free time, I usually take a vacation in countries with winter.

'At winter countries' is ungrammatical. Use 'in' for location and rephrase to 'countries with winter' or 'winter countries' is possible but uncommon. 'Take a vacation in countries with winter' fits the intended meaning. Alternatively 'vacation in winter countries' also works.

× I usually go to Europe and North America.

✓ I usually go to Europe and North America.

This sentence is already correct; 'to' is the appropriate preposition for destinations. No change necessary.

× I love to stay in winter.

✓ I love to spend time in winter.

'Stay in winter' is awkward; native speakers say 'spend time in winter' or 'enjoy winter'. Use 'spend time' to express enjoying the season. Keep infinitive 'to spend' or gerund 'spending' both acceptable.