Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly and coherently: start with a clear topic sentence about current weather, avoid repetition and irrelevant details (e.g., population). Use one or two specific details and a linking word to connect them. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Right now it's very hot where I live because we're in the middle of summer. For example, daytime temperatures often exceed 40°C, so people avoid going outside during peak sun hours. In the evenings it cools down a little, but days remain uncomfortably hot.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence, then add 1–2 clear reasons with linking words (because/so). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “only one only one.” Use precise vocabulary to explain why you like cold weather.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing. For example, nights are cool and I sleep well, and during the day the air is crisp so outdoor activities are pleasant.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons using linking words (because/for example). Mention concrete benefits of wet weather (e.g., crops grow, cooler temperatures) and avoid vague phrases like “very fabulous.” Keep it concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because it cools the air and helps crops grow. For example, heavy rains make the fields greener and reduce dust on the roads, which makes outdoor life more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: say how often you check the forecast and when (e.g., every morning, before travel). Use linking words to explain why (because) and give a brief example. Avoid irrelevant or incomplete sentences (e.g., “I have a farmer”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning, usually on my phone. I do this because I need to plan my day and, for example, decide whether to carry an umbrella or delay outdoor work on rainy days.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence about major effects, then list 2–3 specific impacts using linking words (for example, as a result). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., rising temperatures, extreme weather, pollution) and provide one concrete example. Keep answers concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I think climate change has increased temperatures and extreme weather in recent years. For example, heatwaves are more frequent and intense, and as a result crops and water supplies are under more stress.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear destination and reason, using linking words (because/so). Provide one or two specific details about the climate you want to experience and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Kashmir because it has a much cooler climate and beautiful mountain scenery. For instance, during the summer the temperatures are mild and the fresh air would be a pleasant change from the hot, rainy weather at home.

× I live in II is the biggest country and uh, two days, uh, India are very hot because summer days are very high and uh, and anybody not go the home outside because, uh, sunny days are very hot and the population are day by day increase.

✓ I live in India, which is a very large country. These days, the weather is very hot because summer temperatures are high, so people do not go outside. Also, the population is increasing day by day.

The original contains multiple sentence structure and agreement problems. 'I live in II is the biggest country' mixes two clauses incorrectly; it should be split and 'India' used. 'Two days' is unclear and likely meant 'these days'. Use singular 'weather is' and 'temperature is high' rather than plural 'are'. 'Anybody not go the home outside' should be rephrased to 'people do not go outside'. 'Population are day by day increase' violates subject-verb agreement and word order; correct is 'the population is increasing day by day'. Suggestion: break up long run-on sentences into shorter sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use clear temporal phrases like 'these days'.

× I prefer cold weather because these days weather are very good in night weather are cold, in the day weather are sunny and that's time I like it.

✓ I prefer cold weather because these days the nights are cold and the days are sunny, which I like.

Errors include missing articles and incorrect verb agreement: 'weather are' should be 'the nights are' and 'the days are' using plural nouns with correct verbs. Also remove redundancy 'that's time I like it' and replace with 'which I like'. Suggestion: use definite article 'the' with specific times (the nights/the days) and match plural nouns with 'are'.

× And I personally prefer cold weather because it is only one only one I like to in all.

✓ I personally prefer cold weather because it is the only type of weather I like.

The original repeats 'only one' and has incorrect word order 'I like to in all'. Use a clear noun phrase 'the only type of weather I like'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use natural noun phrases ('type of weather').

× I prefer wet weather because there's time weather are very fabulous and everybody enjoyed that time and in the time of vegetable are growing so much and the roads are very cool and the outer side in the home outer side the weather are very good and I like.

✓ I prefer wet weather because sometimes the weather is wonderful and everyone enjoys it. During the rainy season vegetables grow well, the roads feel cool, and the outside of the house is pleasant.

Many tense and agreement errors: 'there's time weather are' should be 'sometimes the weather is'. 'Everybody enjoyed' should match present habit: 'everyone enjoys it'. 'In the time of vegetable are growing' should be 'during the rainy season vegetables grow well'. 'Weather are very good' should be 'the weather is pleasant'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for occasional events, keep consistent present tense for general preferences, and use clear phrases for seasons and effects.

× Yes, I follow the weather forecast in regular buses because I'm very up to date person and I know the, uh, what about in today weather?

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast regularly because I am an up-to-date person and I want to know about today's weather.

'in regular buses' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'regularly'. 'I'm very up to date person' needs articles and hyphenation: 'an up-to-date person'. 'what about in today weather' should be 'today's weather' or 'about today's weather'. Suggestion: use adverb 'regularly' for frequency, include articles before nouns, and use possessive for time expressions ('today's').

× And that's point I learn about what is the weather forecast in two days, yesterday or next days.

✓ At that point, I check the weather forecast for today, yesterday, or the next few days.

The phrase is ungrammatical and unclear: 'that's point I learn about what is the weather forecast in two days' should be rephrased. Use 'check the weather forecast for...' and clarify time references: 'today, yesterday, or the next few days'. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'check' and standard time expressions.

× And also I have a farmer and I have.

✓ I am also a farmer.

Original is incomplete and ungrammatical 'I have a farmer and I have.' If the speaker means they are a farmer, use 'I am a farmer.' Suggestion: use complete simple subject-verb-complement sentences.

× Climate change are very affected in recent years because before years are a hot days and coldest weather are very normal temperature.

✓ Climate change has had a strong effect in recent years because in the past there were normal hot and cold seasons with consistent temperatures.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: use present perfect 'has had' to indicate recent impact. 'Climate change are very affected' is incorrect; the subject is climate change causing effects. 'Before years are a hot days and coldest weather are very normal temperature' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'in the past there were normal hot and cold seasons'. Suggestion: use 'has had' for recent changes and describe past conditions clearly.

× But in nowadays the all places are polluted in the hot season and the the sunny temperature are very high and.

✓ But nowadays many places are polluted during the hot season, and temperatures are very high.

'in nowadays' is incorrect; use 'nowadays'. 'the all places' should be 'many places' or 'all places' but more natural 'many places'. 'sunny temperature are' should be 'temperatures are'. Suggestion: use 'nowadays' and plural 'temperatures are' with appropriate quantifiers.

× I like to visit Kashmir because it's weather are very good because our days are rainy days and the weather are very cool and in the and in the my pleasure in that days are in nowadays are very hot and that's why point I go to Kashmir.

✓ I would like to visit Kashmir because its weather is very pleasant; our area has rainy days and cool weather, but these days it is very hot here, so I want to go to Kashmir.

Errors include modal/tense choice: use 'would like' for preference of visiting. 'it's weather are' should be 'its weather is'. 'our days are rainy days' unclear — rephrase 'our area has rainy days'. 'that's why point I go' should be 'so I want to go'. Suggestion: use correct possessive 'its', match singular 'weather is', and use 'would like' for polite preference.