Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答はやや不自然で冗長な部分があります。例えば、「I think there is no specific characteristic of weather」という表現は曖昧で、より具体的に四季の特徴を述べると良いでしょう。また、文法的な誤り（"there is Four Seasons" → "there are four seasons"）も改善が必要です。

Ví dụ: In Tokyo, we have four distinct seasons. Summers are quite hot, often reaching around 35°C, while winters are cold but not severe.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容がやや断片的で、話の流れが途切れています。"because"の後にすぐに理由を述べる形にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy winter events like Christmas and my birthday, which make the season special for me.

Gợi ý: 文が不自然で意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。"try to maintain the clinic situation"の意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に何を指しているのか明確にし、冗長な"because"の繰り返しを避けましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I dislike hot and humid conditions that make me sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。"depends on the weather"の使い方が不適切で、"My outfit is change"は文法的に誤りです。より自然な表現で、理由と頻度を明確に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home because it helps me decide what to wear.

Gợi ý: "unrealistic weather"という表現は不自然です。"big bit of problem"も誤りで、"big problem"が正しいです。より具体的で正確な語彙を使い、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: I think one major effect of climate change is extreme weather, like sudden heavy rains and very high temperatures, which can be dangerous for people.

Gợi ý: 文が途中で終わっているように感じられ、内容が不十分です。"my cities"は単数形の"my city"に直し、理由を明確に述べて文を完結させましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit cities with different climates. For example, Hokkaido has a colder atmosphere than Tokyo, especially in winter, which I find interesting to experience.

× In my city, Tokyo, I think there is no specific characteristic of weather, so there is Four Seasons and the summer is hot for about 35°C.

✓ In my city, Tokyo, I think there are no specific characteristics of the weather, so there are four seasons and the summer is hot, around 35°C.

'There is' should be 'there are' because 'characteristics' and 'four seasons' are plural nouns. Also, 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless referring to a proper noun, and 'characteristic of weather' should be pluralized to 'characteristics of the weather' for correctness.

× I prefer cold weather because. Umm. I like the winter because it has a lot of events such as Christmas and my birthday.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I like winter; it has a lot of events such as Christmas and my birthday.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary pauses and periods. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer dry weather because I don't like the wet hot weather because I can. I will sweat a lot and try to maintain the clinic situation.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like hot, wet weather since I sweat a lot and try to maintain a clean condition.

The phrase 'wet hot weather' should be 'hot, wet weather' to correctly order adjectives. 'Maintain the clinic situation' is unclear; likely intended 'maintain a clean condition'. Also, 'because I can' is incomplete and unnecessary here.

× Yes, I have a habit to check the weather early in the morning after uh before I leave the home because depends on the weather. My outfit is change so I usually see the weather on my application.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather early in the morning before I leave home because my outfit changes depending on the weather, so I usually check the weather on my app.

'Have a habit to check' should be 'have a habit of checking'. 'After uh before I leave the home' is confusing; 'before I leave home' is correct. 'Depends on the weather' needs a subject. 'My outfit is change' should be 'my outfit changes'. 'See the weather on my application' is better as 'check the weather on my app'.

× I think one of the biggest effect is the, umm, unrealistic weather such as a sudden heavy rain or very hot weather.

✓ I think one of the biggest effects is unrealistic weather such as sudden heavy rain or very hot weather.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' because it refers to one among many effects. Also, 'the' before 'unrealistic weather' is unnecessary.

× It is very dangerous for humans, so it's the big bit of problem.

✓ It is very dangerous for humans, so it's a big problem.

'The big bit of problem' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a big problem'. 'Bit' is unnecessary here.

× Yes, I'd like to visit the places where the weather is different from my cities, because, for example, in Hokkaido the atmosphere itself is different from Tokyo, so in winter I can feel.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit places where the weather is different from my city because, for example, in Hokkaido the atmosphere itself is different from Tokyo, so in winter I can feel it.

'My cities' should be 'my city' since the speaker refers to one city (Tokyo). Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.