Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, start by stating the current weather, then add specific details about temperature and comparison.

Ví dụ: Currently, the weather where I live is quite hot, as it feels like summer. The temperature often reaches up to 306C, which is higher than usual for this time of year.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid repetition and filler words. Start with a clear preference, then explain why you like that season with specific reasons and linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather, especially during the winter season, because I feel happier and more comfortable in cooler temperatures. For example, I enjoy outdoor activities more when it's cold.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to express your preference clearly and provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain. It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable, especially when I stay indoors and listen to the sound of raindrops.

Gợi ý: Try to give a direct answer first, then add details with linking words. Avoid filler words and improve grammar for clarity. Specify how often and when you check the weather forecast.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out, especially when I have plans for work or travel. This helps me prepare for the day accordingly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and less hesitation. Start with a clear statement about climate change effects, then explain causes and solutions using linking words.

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused unusual weather patterns. One main reason is deforestation, which increases global warming. Therefore, we should plant more trees to help reduce its effects.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Provide a direct response first, then explain your preference with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid filler words and improve sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather. However, I prefer winter weather the most because it is my favorite season and I enjoy the cold.

× The weather here I live is, uh, nowadays it's just like a summer and nowadays, uh, the temperature is uh, up to 30°C, uh, which is quite, uh, high as compared to other uh, summer days.

✓ The weather here where I live is, nowadays it's just like summer and nowadays, the temperature is up to 30°C, which is quite high compared to other summer days.

The phrase 'here I live' is incorrect; it should be 'here where I live' to properly indicate location. Also, 'like a summer' is incorrect because 'summer' is an uncountable season noun and does not take an article 'a'. The phrase 'as compared to' is better simplified to 'compared to' for clarity and correctness.

× I would prefer uh, winter season or all other uh, seasons.

✓ I would prefer the winter season or all other seasons.

The phrase 'winter season' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific season. Also, 'all other uh, seasons' is correct but the article 'the' before 'winter season' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× The cross I enjoy a lot, uh, in winter seasons I really feel happy and enjoy the cold place.

✓ The cold I enjoy a lot; in winter seasons, I really feel happy and enjoy the cold weather.

The word 'cross' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse; it should be 'cold'. Also, 'enjoy the cold place' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'enjoy the cold weather' or 'cold climate'. Preposition 'in' before 'winter seasons' is correct but a comma is needed after 'seasons' for clarity.

× Uh, especially right in the winter seasons, umm, I try.

✓ Especially during the winter seasons, I try.

The phrase 'right in the winter seasons' is awkward; 'during the winter seasons' is more appropriate. The sentence is incomplete; 'I try' should be followed by what the speaker tries to do, but as per instruction, only grammar correction is done.

× I would love to like, uh, wet weather, uh, uh, because I, I really love the, the range is the rent and uh, during rent, uh, I myself would really win and uh, it's really comfort me.

✓ I would love wet weather because I really love the rain, and during rain, I really enjoy myself and it really comforts me.

The phrase 'range is the rent' is incorrect; it should be 'rain'. 'During rent' is incorrect; it should be 'during rain'. 'I myself would really win' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy myself'. 'It's really comfort me' is incorrect; it should be 'it really comforts me'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yeah, most of the time I, uh, watched and checked the weather, uh, when, whenever I have a plan to go somewhere, uh, uh, for, for my work or any other reasons, uh, through go to the town.

✓ Yeah, most of the time I watch and check the weather whenever I have a plan to go somewhere, for my work or any other reasons, to go to town.

The verbs 'watched' and 'checked' are incorrectly in past tense; present tense 'watch' and 'check' are appropriate here because the action is habitual. 'Through go to the town' is incorrect; it should be 'to go to town'. Also, 'the town' is better as 'town' without the article in this context.

× So I checked the weather from before.

✓ So I check the weather beforehand.

The phrase 'checked the weather from before' is awkward and incorrect. 'Check the weather beforehand' is the correct expression. Also, tense is changed to present to match habitual action.

× Yeah, sure. Uh, for recent years, uh, the climate change, uh, really very weirdly, uh, because of, uh, one of the main reason is, uh, deforestation, uh, which is nowadays, which is nowadays A worldwide popular, uh, but uh, we should, uh, plant more trees.

✓ Yeah, sure. In recent years, climate change has been very strange because one of the main reasons is deforestation, which nowadays is a worldwide issue, but we should plant more trees.

'For recent years' should be 'In recent years'. 'Climate change really very weirdly' is incorrect; 'climate change has been very strange' is correct. 'One of the main reason' should be 'one of the main reasons' (plural). 'Which is nowadays A worldwide popular' is incorrect; it should be 'which nowadays is a worldwide issue'. Tense and article usage corrected for clarity.

× Yeah, sure. I would love to like, uh, other cities, uh, but uh, I and explore their weather, but uh, I love to like, uh, the weather, which, uh, I most prefer and which I most like is the winter, uh, which is uh, my favorite and all time best season.

✓ Yeah, sure. I would love to visit other cities and explore their weather, but I love the weather I most prefer, which is winter, my favorite and all-time best season.

The phrase 'I and explore their weather' is incorrect; it should be 'and explore their weather'. 'I love to like' is redundant; 'I love' suffices. 'Which I most prefer and which I most like' is repetitive; simplified to 'the weather I most prefer'. 'All time best season' should be 'all-time best season' with a hyphen.