Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“The weather I live is majorly sunny”应为“The weather where I live is mostly sunny”。建议注意句子结构和时态的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is mostly sunny. I enjoy sunny days because I can go outside and play with my friends. It's really enjoyable, and we often fly kites together.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，如“I pray for cold weather”应为“I prefer cold weather”。建议使用连贯的句子并正确使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I love seeing snow in winter. Moreover, I can play snowball fights with my friends, which is very fun.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法混乱，如“drivers”应为“dry weather”，句子结构不完整。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性，避免表达模糊。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather. Wet weather makes me feel upset and lazy, but dry weather makes me feel energetic and active.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，如“check habit”应为“check the weather forecast”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every morning. This helps me plan my day, like choosing what to wear and deciding on activities.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“It have it has”应为“It has”，表达较为简单。建议使用更具体的细节和多样的词汇来丰富答案。

Ví dụ: Climate change in recent years has had a serious impact on our daily lives. For example, extreme weather events have become more frequent, so we need to pay more attention and protect the environment.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“different experience with different vessels”不明确。建议使用准确的词汇和清晰的表达来说明理由。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Sanya, which is hot, to experience a different environment and enjoy new activities.

× The weather I live is majorly sunny.

✓ The weather where I live is mostly sunny.

这里的 'weather' 是不可数名词，不能用 'majorly' 修饰，应该用副词 'mostly' 来表达 '大部分时间' 的意思。

× The weather I live is majorly sunny.

✓ The weather where I live is mostly sunny.

'majorly' 是口语中不正式的副词，正式表达应使用 'mostly'，表示大部分时间。

× It really fascinating and we can fly kites and all.

✓ It is really fascinating, and we can fly kites and so on.

句子缺少系动词 'is'，导致结构不完整。应补充 'is' 使句子完整。

× I pray for cold weather of course, as it's always cold in the winter, that I can see the snow, which I like best and what's more I can. Play snowballs with my friends.

✓ I hope for cold weather, of course, as it's always cold in the winter, so I can see the snow, which I like best, and what's more, I can play snowball fights with my friends.

'pray for' 用于宗教祈祷，不适合表达希望天气，应使用 'hope for'。句子中断句不当，'can. Play' 应连成一句。

× I like drivers, definitely.

✓ I like dry weather, definitely.

'drivers' 是复数名词，且与上下文不符，应为 'dry' 形容词修饰天气。

× I let I do not want to do anything while the dry weather I will be energetic.

✓ I don't want to do anything when it's wet, but I feel energetic in dry weather.

句子结构混乱，'I let I do not want' 不合语法，应简化为 'I don't want to do anything'，并调整连接词和句子顺序。

× And how often? Yes, I have that habit. Really, I usually check habit every day in the morning that I can play my days properly such as dressing or activities.

✓ How often? Yes, I have that habit. I usually check the weather every morning so that I can plan my day properly, such as choosing clothes or activities.

句子中 'check habit' 用法错误，应为 'check the weather'。'play my days' 语义不明，应为 'plan my day'。

× The climate change in recent years really matters. It have it has bad impact on human daily life, so we should care more about it and protect our environment.

✓ Climate change in recent years really matters. It has a bad impact on human daily life, so we should care more about it and protect our environment.

'It have it has' 是重复且错误的动词形式，应使用单数第三人称 'has'。

× Definitely I'd like to travel to other cities that with different climates.

✓ Definitely, I'd like to travel to other cities that have different climates.

'that with different climates' 缺少动词，应改为 'that have different climates'。

× For example, I'd like to go to Sanya with hot weather that I could have different experience with different vessels.

✓ For example, I'd like to go to Sanya with hot weather so that I could have different experiences with different cultures.

'vessels' 意思是船只，与语境不符，应为 'cultures'（文化）。'experience' 应用复数形式 'experiences'。