Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
The weather where I like is generally quite mild and rising through the year.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer cold weather because it feel refreshing and especially after spending time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activation.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
There I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
Indozio Climate change has a huge profound effect on the environment and human life.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different claims from my own.
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Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'where I like' nên là 'where I live'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng tính hiệu quả.
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is generally mild and tends to get warmer as the year progresses.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it feel' nên là 'it feels'. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing, especially after spending time outdoors in the heat.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có lỗi từ vựng như 'daily activation' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'daily activities'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities like walking or cycling.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ thừa như 'There'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời có thể thêm lý do để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work to plan my day accordingly.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi phát âm hoặc từ không chính xác như 'Indozio'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi từ vựng và mở rộng câu trả lời với các ví dụ hoặc chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: Climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life, causing extreme weather events and rising sea levels.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi từ vựng như 'claims' thay vì 'climates'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do hoặc kế hoạch cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own to experience new environments and cultures.
Ngữ pháp
× The weather where I like is generally quite mild and rising through the year.
✓ The weather where I live is generally quite mild and rises throughout the year.
The verb 'like' is incorrect here; it should be 'live' to indicate the place where the student resides. Also, 'rising' is a present participle and does not fit here; the correct verb form is 'rises' to agree with the singular subject 'weather'. Additionally, 'through the year' should be 'throughout the year' for correct prepositional usage.
× I prefer cold weather because it feel refreshing and especially after spending time.
✓ I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing, especially after spending time.
The verb 'feel' should be in the third person singular form 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'and especially after spending time' is incomplete and awkward; it is better to say 'especially after spending time' without 'and'.
× I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activation.
✓ I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.
The word 'activation' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'activities' to refer to daily tasks or actions.
× There I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work.
✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work.
The word 'There' is unnecessary and incorrect at the beginning of the sentence. The sentence should start directly with the subject 'I'.
× Indozio Climate change has a huge profound effect on the environment and human life.
✓ Indozio climate change has a huge and profound effect on the environment and human life.
The phrase 'huge profound' is incorrect; it needs a conjunction 'and' to connect the two adjectives properly. Also, 'Climate' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a proper noun.
× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different claims from my own.
✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own.
The word 'city' should be plural 'cities' to match the context of visiting multiple places. Also, 'claims' is a misspelling of 'climates'.
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