Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'I lived'는 현재 거주를 묻는 질문에 부적절하며, 'while winter so quite cold'는 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 다듬고, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요.

Ví dụ: I live in Korea, where the weather changes a lot with the seasons. Summers are usually hot and humid, while winters are quite cold with some snow. Spring and autumn are mild and pleasant.

Gợi ý: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'How weather makes me feel tired'는 문법적으로 틀렸고, 문장이 불완전합니다. 또한, 추가 설명을 연결어로 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I personally prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable wearing layers of clothes. Moreover, hot weather makes me feel tired and sweaty, especially in summer.

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 연결어를 조금 더 활용하여 문장 간의 논리적 흐름을 강화할 수 있습니다. 또한, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I would say dry weather because it's easier to go outside and do activities without worrying about rain. Although wet weather can be refreshing sometimes, too much rain often makes me feel gloomy and less motivated to go out.

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이며, 문법적으로도 정확합니다. 다만, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간의 흐름을 조금 더 부드럽게 만들면 좋겠습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast once in the morning on my phone, especially if I have plans to go out. This helps me decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'someone's are hotter'는 의미가 불분명하고 틀린 표현입니다. 또한, 'heat heat waves'는 중복입니다. 구체적인 예시와 정확한 문장 구성을 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: I think the biggest effect of climate change is that the seasons have become less predictable. For example, summers are hotter than before, and there are more extreme weather events like heavy rain and heat waves.

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하며, 문법적으로도 정확합니다. 다만, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간의 흐름을 조금 더 부드럽게 만들면 더욱 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I'd love to visit places with mild weather all year round, such as some European cities. Experiencing a different climate would be exciting and a great way to enjoy new outdoor activities.

× I lived in Korea and the weather changes a lot with the seasons.

✓ I live in Korea and the weather changes a lot with the seasons.

The sentence describes a current situation, so the present tense 'live' should be used instead of the past tense 'lived'.

× Summers are usually hot and humid while winter so quite cold with some snow.

✓ Summers are usually hot and humid while winter is quite cold with some snow.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'winter', which is necessary for correct sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× How weather makes me feel tired and sweaty, especially in summer.

✓ Hot weather makes me feel tired and sweaty, especially in summer.

The pronoun 'How' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'Hot' to correctly describe the weather causing tiredness and sweatiness.

× For example, someone's are hotter than before and there are more extreme weather events like heavy rain or heat heat waves.

✓ For example, some seasons are hotter than before and there are more extreme weather events like heavy rain or heat waves.

The phrase 'someone's' is incorrect; it should be 'some seasons' to refer to multiple seasons. Also, 'heat heat waves' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'heat waves'.