Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达天气特点。

Ví dụ: I live in a city that is usually hot and humid, especially in summer. This is because mountains surround the city, trapping heat and making the air feel sticky and uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，需注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。避免口语填充词，清晰表达个人喜好和原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because hot and humid conditions make me feel uncomfortable. Cold weather gives me a sense of calm and relaxation.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明偏好并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because the humidity and high temperatures in my city during summer make me feel uncomfortable and sticky.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够自然，语法和用词需改进。建议明确说明习惯并用连贯的句子表达原因。

Ví dụ: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I always carry an umbrella and prepare for any weather. So, I don't worry much about rain or cloudy days.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体内容。建议明确表达观点，提供具体影响和原因。

Ví dụ: I believe climate change affects people's daily lives by causing extreme weather, such as heatwaves and floods, which disrupt normal activities.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但用词和句式可更自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy experiencing new things, so visiting cities with different climates is exciting for me. It allows me to enjoy different types of weather.

× Well, I live a city that is usually very humid and hot, especially during the summer months.

✓ Well, I live in a city that is usually very humid and hot, especially during the summer months.

这里缺少介词'in'，正确表达是 'live in a city'，表示居住在某个城市。

× Well, I live a city that is usually very humid and hot, especially during the summer months.

✓ Well, I live in a city that is usually very humid and hot, especially during the summer months.

动词 'live' 后面需要介词 'in' 来表示居住的地点。

× That is mainly because the city is surrounded by mountains which trap the heat and make it difficult for the year to circulate.

✓ That is mainly because the city is surrounded by mountains which trap the heat and make it difficult for the air to circulate.

原句中 'year' 应为 'air'，意思是空气流通困难，拼写错误导致词义错误。

× Actually, I prefer cold weather because I live in the city which is humid and has a high temperature that will make me feel uncomfortable and sticky and also, you know, cold weather will get me a sense of calm and the. Maybe it's quite because my.

✓ Actually, I prefer cold weather because I live in a city which is humid and has a high temperature that makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky. Also, you know, cold weather gives me a sense of calm. Maybe it's because of that.

原句中 'the city' 应为 'a city'，表示泛指一个城市；'will make' 改为 'makes' 以符合一般现在时描述习惯；句子结构混乱，需拆分并补充缺失部分。

× Well I prefer a dry weather because I live in a city which is humid and has a time high temperature in summer month when every every time I during the summer holidays you will feel uncomfortable and sticky.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because I live in a city which is humid and has a high temperature in the summer months. Every time during the summer holidays, you feel uncomfortable and sticky.

'a dry weather' 中 'weather' 是不可数名词，不用加冠词 'a'；'time high temperature' 应为 'high temperature'；'summer month' 应为复数 'summer months'；句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Well, actually I'm not the person who always like to check the weather forecast because every time I will take the umbrella and get everything prepared.

✓ Well, actually I'm not the person who always likes to check the weather forecast because every time I take an umbrella and get everything prepared.

'who always like' 中主语是第三人称单数，动词应加 's' 变为 'likes'；'will take' 改为一般现在时 'take'，符合习惯表达。

× So I don't care about whether it will going to rain or it's cloudy day.

✓ So I don't care about whether it is going to rain or if it's a cloudy day.

'will going to rain' 是错误的时态表达，应为 'is going to rain'；'it's cloudy day' 缺少冠词，应为 'it's a cloudy day'。

× Well, actually says there are a lot of controversies around this topic, but for me, I think climate change will affect People's Daily lives because you know climate change, you know the warming will make people the.

✓ Well, actually, there are a lot of controversies around this topic, but for me, I think climate change will affect people's daily lives because, you know, climate change and global warming will impact people.

原句结构混乱，'actually says' 不合适，应去掉 'says'；'People's Daily lives' 中 'Daily' 应小写；句尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, because I'm the person who likes the novelty and experience living my own city to another different city.

✓ Yes, because I'm the person who likes novelty and experiencing living in my own city and moving to another different city.

'experience living my own city to another different city' 结构不正确，需改为 'experiencing living in my own city and moving to another different city'，使表达更自然。

× It's thrilling for me. I can taste another different type of weather.

✓ It's thrilling for me. I can experience another different type of weather.

'taste' 用于味觉，不适合描述感受天气，应改为 'experience'。