Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
The weather in the area that I stand is often sunny and cloudy. Sometimes it rains and that not happen very often. Overall, the climate is quite mild and comfortable throughout the year. I really like the weather a lot.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I would definitely prefer cold weather because I really dislike sweating in cold condition. You can just put on more extra layers to stay warm, but when it comes to the hot weather you no matter what you do you can just cool down. Additionally, cold weather is more refreshing and comfortable for outdoor activities.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer dry weather because it make me feel more comfortable and energetic. On the other hand, wet weather often makes me uncomfortable and annoyed, especially when it rains all day.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Yes I am. I have a habit of checking weather forecasts every day, especially in the morning. I need to take my son to the kindergarten. I will check forecast before I take him. I need to make sure he wear enough clothes to stay warm.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
I think one of the most important facts of climate change in recent years is global warming. I remember when I was a child I needed to wear a down jacket to keep warm, but nowadays coat is enough that shows the temperature is rising all the time.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I would like to visit other cities that have different climates because that offers me a chance to see different scenarios in different countries. I really enjoy exploring, exploring novelty things.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“that not happen”应为“that does not happen”。此外,回答可以更简洁自然,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually sunny and sometimes cloudy. It rarely rains, and the climate is mild and comfortable all year round. I really enjoy this kind of weather.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“sweating in cold condition”应为“sweating in hot conditions”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating in hot conditions. In cold weather, you can wear extra layers to keep warm, but it's hard to cool down in hot weather. Also, cold weather is more refreshing and better for outdoor activities.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有语法错误,如“it make me”应为“it makes me”。建议注意主谓一致,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel more comfortable and energetic. In contrast, wet weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and annoyed, especially when it rains all day.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,但句子较短且重复。建议合并句子,使用连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before taking my son to kindergarten to make sure he wears enough clothes to stay warm.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但表达不够自然,如“that shows the temperature is rising all the time”可以更简洁。建议使用更自然的表达和适当的连接词。
Ví dụ: One major effect of climate change recently is global warming. For example, when I was a child, I needed a down jacket to keep warm, but now a regular coat is enough, which shows that temperatures have been rising.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和表达不自然的问题,如“exploring, exploring novelty things”。建议避免重复,使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I would like to visit cities with different climates because it gives me a chance to experience new environments and cultures. I really enjoy exploring new things.
× The weather in the area that I stand is often sunny and cloudy.
✓ The weather in the area where I stand is often sunny and cloudy.
这里的 'that I stand' 用法不正确,应该用 'where I stand' 来表示地点。虽然这不是严格的单复数错误,但根据题目要求,选择最接近的类型。建议使用 'where' 引导地点状语从句。
× Sometimes it rains and that not happen very often.
✓ Sometimes it rains and that does not happen very often.
句中缺少助动词 'does',导致谓语动词形式错误。'that' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词需要用 'does not' 来构成否定句。
× I would definitely prefer cold weather because I really dislike sweating in cold condition.
✓ I would definitely prefer cold weather because I really dislike sweating in cold conditions.
'condition' 应该用复数形式 'conditions',因为这里指的是一般的多种寒冷环境。单数形式不符合语境。
× You can just put on more extra layers to stay warm, but when it comes to the hot weather you no matter what you do you can just cool down.
✓ You can just put on more extra layers to stay warm, but when it comes to hot weather, no matter what you do, you just can't cool down.
原句中缺少否定助动词 'can't',导致句意不清。'no matter what you do' 是让步状语,后面应接完整句子。
× I prefer dry weather because it make me feel more comfortable and energetic.
✓ I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel more comfortable and energetic.
主语 'it' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 'make' 应改为 'makes',保持主谓一致。
× I need to make sure he wear enough clothes to stay warm.
✓ I need to make sure he wears enough clothes to stay warm.
主语 'he' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 'wear' 应改为 'wears',保持主谓一致。
× I think one of the most important facts of climate change in recent years is global warming.
✓ I think one of the most important aspects of climate change in recent years is global warming.
'facts' 用复数不合适,'one of the' 后面应接复数名词,但这里更合适用 'aspects' 表示方面。
× I remember when I was a child I needed to wear a down jacket to keep warm, but nowadays coat is enough that shows the temperature is rising all the time.
✓ I remember when I was a child I needed to wear a down jacket to keep warm, but nowadays a coat is enough; that shows the temperature is rising all the time.
'coat' 前缺少冠词 'a',需要加上。句子中两个分句应用分号或句号分开。
× I really enjoy exploring, exploring novelty things.
✓ I really enjoy exploring, exploring novel things.
'novelty' 是名词,形容词应为 'novel',表示新奇的。这里用形容词修饰 'things'。