Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I live in Vietnam, which has a tropical climate. In the south, there are two main seasons: the sunny season and the rainy season. However, in the north, we experience four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I feel comfortable wearing light clothes. When I was a child, my family didn't have air conditioning, so I got used to the heat. Also, cold weather makes me feel unwell because I once had an accident and got hurt.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because in South Asia, after the Lunar New Year, the weather becomes cold and wet. This causes problems like water entering our house, which is very unpleasant.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, checking the weather forecast is a habit for my whole family. We usually watch the weather channel on TV every evening during dinner to stay updated.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy cung cấp ý kiến cụ thể và chi tiết hơn.

Ví dụ: I believe that climate change in recent years is mainly caused by human activities. Because we do not protect the environment well, it is important to raise awareness about environmental protection.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy discovering new places. If I have the chance, I will ask my friends to join me and prepare everything we need for the trip.

× I live in Vietnam, where's the weather like tropical and we have two season in the South, in the South like sunny and rainy and we have 4 season in the north like summer, spring, autumn in.

✓ I live in Vietnam, where the weather is tropical and we have two seasons in the South, like sunny and rainy, and we have four seasons in the North, like summer, spring, and autumn.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'where's' instead of 'where the weather is'. Also, 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because there are multiple seasons. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct use of 'there is/are'.

× I live in Vietnam, where's the weather like tropical and we have two season in the South, in the South like sunny and rainy and we have 4 season in the north like summer, spring, autumn in.

✓ I live in Vietnam, where the weather is tropical and we have two seasons in the South, like sunny and rainy, and we have four seasons in the North, like summer, spring, and autumn.

The number '4' should be written as 'four' in formal writing. Also, 'season' should be plural 'seasons' to match the quantity.

× I prefer hot weather because I can wear the hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes in hot weather.

The phrase 'I can wear the hot weather' is incorrect. Modal verb 'can' should be followed by an action verb. The intended meaning is likely about clothing suitable for hot weather.

× My family when I was a child didn't have a air condition so I can bear it.

✓ My family, when I was a child, didn't have air conditioning, so I could bear it.

'a air condition' is incorrect; it should be 'air conditioning' without an article. Also, 'can' should be past tense 'could' to match 'when I was a child'.

× My family when I was a child didn't have a air condition so I can bear it.

✓ My family, when I was a child, didn't have air conditioning, so I could bear it.

'a air condition' is incorrect; 'air conditioning' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'.

× Cold weather I easily to get sick because I have an accident and I'm really hurt.

✓ In cold weather, I easily get sick because I had an accident and was really hurt.

The phrase 'Cold weather I easily to get sick' is incorrect. It should be 'In cold weather, I easily get sick'. Also, 'have an accident' should be past tense 'had an accident' to match the context.

× Cold weather I easily to get sick because I have an accident and I'm really hurt.

✓ In cold weather, I easily get sick because I had an accident and was really hurt.

Preposition 'in' is needed before 'cold weather' to indicate the condition. Also, 'to get' is incorrect here; it should be 'get'.

× I prefer dry weather because I mean South Asia, so after the Lunar New Year we have a weather cold noon and it is so terrible.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I mean South Asia, so after the Lunar New Year we have cold weather at noon and it is so terrible.

The phrase 'a weather cold noon' is incorrect. 'Weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'cold noon' should be 'cold weather at noon'.

× Everything in our house will wet and have water in there.

✓ Everything in our house will be wet and there will be water inside.

'will wet' is incorrect; 'wet' is an adjective and needs a linking verb 'be'. Also, 'have water in there' is awkward; better to say 'there will be water inside'.

× Yes, and this my whole family habit because the weather forecast channel on TV is always on it.

✓ Yes, and this is my whole family's habit because the weather forecast channel on TV is always on.

'this my whole family habit' is missing the verb 'is' and possessive form 'family's' is needed. Also, 'on it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× So we often check the weather on the TV every day or every evening when we have dinner.

✓ So we often check the weather on TV every day or every evening when we have dinner.

The preposition 'on' before 'TV' is correct, but 'the TV' is less common; 'on TV' is preferred.

× Oh, climate change and weather is not my measure, but I think the effects of climate change in recent years occurred by humans because we aren't protect the environment, so we have to improve our awareness of protection environment.

✓ Oh, climate change and weather are not my area of expertise, but I think the effects of climate change in recent years are caused by humans because we don't protect the environment, so we have to improve our awareness of environmental protection.

'climate change and weather is' should be 'are' for plural subject. 'occurred by humans' is incorrect; 'caused by humans' is correct. 'aren't protect' should be 'don't protect'. 'protection environment' should be 'environmental protection'.

× I really like to visit other cities that help different climates from where I live because I love discovering and exploring and if I can visit other cities that have different climates I care I I will ask my friend to go together with me and prepare some necessary things that help me.

✓ I really like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I love discovering and exploring. If I can visit other cities with different climates, I will ask my friend to go with me and prepare some necessary things to help me.

'help different climates' is incorrect; it should be 'have different climates'. 'I care I I will' is unclear and likely a mistake. 'go together with me' is better as 'go with me'. 'things that help me' is better as 'things to help me'.