Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime kullanımı var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha etkili yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanarak detayları daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually very hot and humid during the summer, but in winter, it tends to be warm with frequent rain.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlatım bozuklukları var. Daha doğal ifadeler kullanarak ve bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlayarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because when it's cold, you can wear a jacket to keep warm, but when it's too hot, it's hard to cool down.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından geliştirme gerekiyor. Daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanarak, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting wet in the rain. When I get wet, I often catch a cold, which makes it hard for me to work comfortably.

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi geliştirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always check the weather forecast before I go out because it can rain unexpectedly. Even if it's sunny, I like to carry an umbrella just in case.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve anlatım bozuklukları var. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi daha net ifade etmeye çalışın.

Ví dụ: Climate change has many effects on people's lives, but I think the most important one is water shortage, which is crucial for human survival.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Daha doğal ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't want to visit other cities just to experience different climates because my country has almost all types of climates, and I have already seen them all.

× The weather is generally too hot in the summer and there are a lot of humidity, but in winter time it's warm and there are a lot of rain.

✓ The weather is generally too hot in the summer and there is a lot of humidity, but in winter time it's warm and there is a lot of rain.

'Humidity' and 'rain' are uncountable nouns and should be used with 'there is' instead of 'there are'. Using 'a lot of' with uncountable nouns is correct, but the verb must agree in singular form.

× I like cold weather more because when the weather is cold you can wear jacket or something like that to get yourself hot, but if the outside is too hot, you cannot make yourself cold.

✓ I like cold weather more because when the weather is cold you can wear a jacket or something like that to keep yourself warm, but if the outside is too hot, you cannot make yourself cold.

The noun 'jacket' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'get yourself hot' is unnatural; 'keep yourself warm' is more appropriate.

× I prefer dry weather more because when it's rain I don't wanna get to it.

✓ I prefer dry weather more because when it rains I don't want to get wet.

'When it's rain' is incorrect; the correct form is 'when it rains'. Also, 'get to it' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'get wet'. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× If I get wet I got sick very easily and when I get sick I don't feel myself comfortable while working or doing another jobs and I cannot make myself better.

✓ If I get wet, I get sick very easily and when I get sick, I don't feel comfortable while working or doing other jobs and I cannot get better quickly.

The sentence mixes past tense 'got' with present tense 'get'. Consistency in present tense is needed. Also, 'feel myself comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'feel comfortable'. 'Another jobs' should be 'other jobs'. 'Make myself better' is unnatural; 'get better' is correct.

× Yes, I always check the weather because before I go out because it always can rain.

✓ Yes, I always check the weather before I go out because it can always rain.

The sentence has redundant 'because' and awkward word order. 'It always can rain' should be 'it can always rain' for natural English.

× If the outside is sunny, you cannot be sure about it's not going to rain today.

✓ If the outside is sunny, you cannot be sure that it is not going to rain today.

'About it's not going to rain' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'sure that it is not going to rain'. Also, 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' and should be used properly.

× That's why I get my umbrella with me if it's raining.

✓ That's why I take my umbrella with me if it's raining.

The verb 'get' is incorrect here; 'take' is the correct verb to indicate bringing an umbrella along.

× There are a lot of effects of climate change in people living, but in my opinion, the more the most important one is the there are water shortage.

✓ There are a lot of effects of climate change on people's lives, but in my opinion, the most important one is water shortage.

'Effects of climate change in people living' is incorrect; it should be 'effects of climate change on people's lives'. 'The more the most important one is the there are water shortage' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'the most important one is water shortage'. 'Water shortage' is uncountable and singular.

× To be honest, I don't want to visit other cities just to see the their climates because in my country we see almost all the different climates.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to visit other cities just to see their climates because in my country we have almost all the different climates.

'The their climates' is incorrect; 'their climates' is correct. Also, 'we see almost all the different climates' is unnatural; 'we have almost all the different climates' is better.

× So I've seen every one of them and I'm not intend to see other climate climate changes.

✓ So I've seen every one of them and I don't intend to see other climate changes.

'I'm not intend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't intend'. Also, 'other climate climate changes' repeats 'climate' unnecessarily.