Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và không rõ ràng về các mùa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về thời tiết từng mùa.

Ví dụ: I live in Vietnam, which has four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. Each season brings different weather, from hot and humid summers to cool and dry winters.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về sở thích của mình và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'Not at all' khi trả lời câu hỏi lựa chọn.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather, especially in autumn, because it's comfortable and I don't have to wear many clothes. Also, I can go outside without worrying about heavy rain, which is common in Vietnam during summer.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer balanced weather that is neither too dry nor too wet because it makes daily chores like cleaning and laundry easier and more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen kiểm tra thời tiết.

Ví dụ: I usually don't check the weather forecast because the weather in Vietnam is unpredictable. Instead, I always carry a bag with essentials to prepare for any kind of weather.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên phát triển ý tưởng đầy đủ, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh câu bị dang dở.

Ví dụ: I believe pollution is the main cause of climate change in recent years. Human activities have contaminated the environment, leading to unpredictable and extreme weather patterns.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ lặp lại và câu không tự nhiên. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện ý muốn khám phá thế giới.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Living in Vietnam all my life, I'm curious about other cultures and environments, and I want to broaden my horizons by traveling abroad.

× I'm currently living in Vietnam and I'm really proud to say that in my country there are Four Seasons, so I have the chance to experience all kinds of rare weather.

✓ I'm currently living in Vietnam and I'm really proud to say that in my country there are four seasons, so I have the chance to experience all kinds of rare weather.

The word 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Seasons are countable and plural, so 'seasons' is correct but capitalization is incorrect here.

× It can be cold or hot or cold, it depends.

✓ It can be cold or hot, it depends.

The phrase 'cold or hot or cold' is repetitive. The second 'cold' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× Not at all. I prefer cold weather like autumn because that time I don't have to wear a lot of clothes and I can go out without being worried about the rain in Vietnam because it's raining heavily in Vietnam in the summer.

✓ Not at all. I prefer cold weather like autumn because at that time I don't have to wear a lot of clothes and I can go out without worrying about the rain in Vietnam, as it rains heavily in the summer.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time' to indicate a specific period. Also, 'being worried about the rain' is better expressed as 'worrying about the rain' for natural English usage.

× I like neither of them because I think I I love the big balance like it's not it should not too dry or wet so it would be more comfortable for me to clean my house or do the laundry.

✓ I like neither of them because I think I love a good balance; it should not be too dry or too wet so it would be more comfortable for me to clean my house or do the laundry.

The phrase 'I I love the big balance like it's not it should not too dry or wet' is confusing and ungrammatical. It should be corrected to 'I love a good balance; it should not be too dry or too wet' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, because the weather in Vietnam is really unpredictable. I cannot even trust in the weather forecast. So I always have a bag with me and I have all my preparation for all types of weather in it.

✓ No, because the weather in Vietnam is really unpredictable. I cannot even trust the weather forecast. So I always have a bag with me and all my preparations for all types of weather in it.

The verb 'trust' does not require the preposition 'in' when followed by an object. Also, 'preparation' should be plural 'preparations' when referring to multiple items or actions.

× I think the culprit behind constant changes in weather nowadays is pollution. Like people contaminated other environments a lot, so it causes pollution which creates.

✓ I think the culprit behind constant changes in weather nowadays is pollution. People contaminate the environment a lot, so it causes pollution which creates problems.

The verb 'contaminated' is past tense and should be present tense 'contaminate' to match the present context. 'Other environments' is vague; 'the environment' is more appropriate. The sentence ending with 'which creates' is incomplete and needs an object.

× I'm living in Vietnam for a long time and haven't never gone abroad, so I'm really curious about the world outside.

✓ I've been living in Vietnam for a long time and have never gone abroad, so I'm really curious about the world outside.

The present perfect continuous 'I've been living' is appropriate for an action continuing up to now. 'Haven't never' is a double negative and should be 'have never'.