Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“dinner area”应为“area where I live”，并且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually sunny, but during summer, it often rains all day and the air becomes very humid.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，如“preferred”应为“prefer”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel homesick, especially when I am away from my hometown.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“skins”应为“skin”，“become really dried”应为“becomes very dry”。建议注意单复数和形容词的正确使用，并使句子完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because when it is very dry, my skin tends to crack, which is uncomfortable. In contrast, wet weather keeps my skin healthy.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但句子结构有些冗长且不够自然。建议简化句子，注意语序，如“whether should I bring”应为“whether I should bring”，并避免句子未完成。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night to know if I should bring an umbrella when I go out the next day, which helps me avoid getting wet.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“extreme raining last for about a week”应为“extreme rain lasting about a week”，且句子不完整。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇和完整句子。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has become more common recently. For example, extreme rain lasting for a week has caused floods that destroyed many houses and affected farmers.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“Note, I don't”不自然，句子未完成。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: No, I don't. Although I love traveling, I prefer to stay in places with climates similar to mine. For example, when I visited the United Kingdom, I felt uncomfortable because it was always rainy and cold.

× Well, the weather in my dinner area I live is always sunny, but sometimes when summer comes, the weather will become rainy all the day and the air will become completely damp.

✓ Well, the weather in the area where I live is always sunny, but sometimes in summer, the weather becomes rainy all day and the air becomes completely damp.

原句中“my dinner area I live”结构混乱，应该调整为“the area where I live”以表达清楚地点关系；“will become rainy all the day”时态和表达不自然，改为一般现在时“becomes rainy all day”更符合描述习惯。

× I preferred hot weather, to be honest.

✓ I prefer hot weather, to be honest.

此处表达的是一般现在时的喜好，使用过去时“preferred”不合适，应使用一般现在时“prefer”。

× because when the weather's become really cold, it made me homesick, especially when I was when I'm not in my hometown.

✓ because when the weather becomes really cold, it makes me homesick, especially when I am not in my hometown.

“weather's become”时态错误，应为一般现在时“weather becomes”；“it made me”应为“一般现在时”对应“it makes me”；“when I was when I'm not”结构重复且时态混乱，应改为“when I am not”。

× So in the in the contrast, the cold weather.

✓ So, in contrast, I prefer cold weather.

原句结构不完整且重复，应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整且表达清晰。

× I preferred wet weather because when the weather become really dried, my skins are likely to become crack, which is really which is really uncomfortable for me.

✓ I prefer wet weather because when the weather becomes really dry, my skin is likely to crack, which is really uncomfortable for me.

“preferred”应为一般现在时“prefer”；“become”应为第三人称单数“becomes”；“dried”用错，应为形容词“dry”；“skins”应为不可数名词“skin”；“become crack”结构错误，应为“is likely to crack”。

× In a contrast, the wet weather is suitable for my skins and I.

✓ In contrast, wet weather is suitable for my skin and me.

“In a contrast”应为固定短语“In contrast”；“skins”应为“skin”；“my skins and I”应改为“my skin and me”，因为是宾语。

× I will check the weather forecast every night so that I can know what the weather will be like tomorrow and whether should I bring the umbrella with me if I have to go out, which can prevent many unnecessary.

✓ I check the weather forecast every night so that I can know what the weather will be like tomorrow and whether I should bring an umbrella with me if I have to go out, which can prevent many unnecessary problems.

“I will check”改为一般现在时“check”更符合习惯；“whether should I bring”语序错误，应为“whether I should bring”；“the umbrella”改为不定冠词“an umbrella”；句尾“which can prevent many unnecessary”不完整，补充“problems”。

× I think the climate change nowadays have become more and more common.

✓ I think climate change nowadays has become more and more common.

“climate change”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数“has”，而非复数“have”。

× For example, the extreme raining last for about a week which leads to the flawed destroying many house or farmers are really prevalent nowadays.

✓ For example, extreme rain lasting for about a week has led to widespread damage, destroying many houses, and problems for farmers are really prevalent nowadays.

“extreme raining”应为“extreme rain”；“last for about a week”时态需调整为现在完成时“lasting for about a week”；“the flawed destroying many house”结构混乱，应改为“has led to widespread damage, destroying many houses”；“house”应为复数“houses”；句子结构需调整使表达清晰。

× Note, I don't, although I love traveling, but I don't like to experience the different climates from where I live.

✓ No, I don't. Although I love traveling, I don't like to experience climates different from where I live.

“Note”应为“No”；句中“although”与“but”重复使用，去掉“but”；“the different climates from where I live”表达不自然，改为“climates different from where I live”。

× For example, when I visit the United Kingdom, I felt really uncomfortable because the weather there was always rainy and wet and the temperature is around.

✓ For example, when I visited the United Kingdom, I felt really uncomfortable because the weather there was always rainy and wet and the temperature was around.

“visit”应为过去时“visited”以对应“felt”；“temperature is”应为过去时“temperature was”；句尾“temperature was around”不完整，建议补充具体温度。