Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和口语填充词，句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简洁描述天气变化，并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: I live in Guangzhou, where the weather is quite changeable. Sometimes it's sunny, but recently it's been rainy due to a typhoon.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，应注意主谓一致，避免无关内容，保持回答简洁且相关。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy going outdoors. I can hang out with friends and play football comfortably in warm weather.

Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰，避免重复和语法错误。可以具体说明喜欢干燥天气的原因，并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes clothes damp and uncomfortable. Also, it's hard to wear new clothes when it's rainy.

Gợi ý: 回答中应注意时态和语法，表达更自然流畅。可以简洁说明习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening to know the next day's weather. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理，避免语法错误，清晰表达观点并用连词连接。

Ví dụ: I think climate change is caused by excessive carbon dioxide emissions from cars and buses. As a result, the weather has become much hotter than before.

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，避免重复和语法错误。可以明确表达观点并给出具体理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer to stay in Guangzhou because I'm used to its climate. Visiting a dry city like Beijing might be uncomfortable for me at first.

× I'm living in Guangzhou now.

✓ I live in Guangzhou now.

这里描述的是现在的状态，应该使用一般现在时，而不是现在进行时。现在进行时通常表示正在发生的动作。

× The weather in Guangzhou is changeable.

✓ The weather in Guangzhou is changeable.

此句无明显冠词错误，保持原句。

× sometimes it's raining

✓ sometimes it rains

描述习惯性或经常发生的事情时，应使用一般现在时，而不是现在进行时。

× currently it's always rainy because of the typhoon.

✓ currently it's always rainy because of the typhoon.

此句无明显动词-ing形式错误，保持原句。

× I'm don't afraid of hot weather.

✓ I'm not afraid of hot weather.

助动词和否定词的顺序错误，应为“I'm not afraid”。

× I can also go outdoor when I'm in hot weather.

✓ I can also go outdoors when the weather is hot.

“outdoor”是形容词，表示“户外的”，应使用副词“outdoors”表示“在户外”。

× I don't afraid of it, but all I'm really, really afraid of coding.

✓ I'm not afraid of it, but actually I'm really, really afraid of coding.

“don't afraid”结构错误，应使用“I'm not afraid”。

× I, I, I can't get up early when I you know, when I.

✓ I can't get up early, you know.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需简化表达。

× In Guangzhou I prefer dry weather weather.

✓ In Guangzhou, I prefer dry weather.

重复使用“weather”是多余的，应去掉重复词。

× In the dry weather you can just drink some water to avoid enjoying.

✓ In dry weather, you can just drink some water to avoid dehydration.

“avoid enjoying”不合适，应该是“avoid dehydration”（避免脱水）。

× When you are in wet weather, the clothing can't be dry and can also be wet.

✓ When the weather is wet, clothes can't dry and can get wet.

“clothing”用复数形式“clothes”更自然，且句子表达更清晰。

× You can't wear the new clothes because it can't be it also be wet.

✓ You can't wear new clothes because they will get wet.

“clothes”是复数，代词应使用“they”，且句子表达更通顺。

× So I I afraid of wet weather.

✓ So I am afraid of wet weather.

缺少动词“am”，应为“I'm afraid”。

× Yes, I also checking the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I also check the weather forecast.

“checking”应改为一般现在时“check”，与主语“I”一致。

× I will check the weather forecast in evening to see the weather results of the next day weather and maybe every day.

✓ I will check the weather forecast in the evening to see the weather for the next day, maybe every day.

“in evening”应为“in the evening”，且表达更简洁。

× I think because you can let me know the weather like on the next day I can bring the umbrella or not.

✓ I think it can let me know the weather for the next day so I can decide whether to bring an umbrella or not.

句子结构不完整，需补充主语和连接词，使表达更清晰。

× Uh, I say it cause carbon dioxide emission too much and let the car because of the cars and the bus is driving too fast to cause the emission increasing of carbon dioxide.

✓ Uh, I think it is caused by too much carbon dioxide emission because cars and buses are driving too fast, which increases the emission of carbon dioxide.

句子结构混乱，需调整语序和连接词，使句子通顺。

× So and let the weather being too much hotter than before.

✓ So the weather has become much hotter than before.

“let the weather being”结构错误，应使用“has become”。

× No, I say I'm getting used to the weather like in my living city.

✓ No, I think I'm getting used to the weather in my city.

“like in my living city”表达不自然，改为“in my city”。

× If I go to the visit other city, I will feel I'm not get used to it because you such as I'm living in Guangzhou and go to Beijing.

✓ If I visit another city, I will feel that I'm not used to it, for example, living in Guangzhou and going to Beijing.

句子结构不完整且用词错误，需调整语序和词汇。

× I feel Beijing is very dry.

✓ I feel Beijing is very dry.

此句无明显错误，保持原句。

× I can get used to it because Guangzhou is a very vast city.

✓ I can't get used to it because Guangzhou is a very vast city.

根据上下文，表达应为“我不能习惯”，故用否定形式。