Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“make my emotion happily”应为“makes me happy”。建议注意主谓一致和正确使用形容词、副词。此外，回答较为重复，建议简洁表达。

Ví dụ: It's a sunny day where I live, which I really enjoy because it makes me feel warm and happy. Sunny days are perfect for outdoor activities like exercising.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“you were cold”应为“you are cold”，“cannot to put”应为“cannot wear”。建议加强时态和动词搭配的学习，同时表达应更简洁明了。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I can wear many layers of clothes to keep warm, but in hot weather, wearing too many clothes is uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在主谓不一致，如“dry weather make me”应为“dry weather makes me”。建议注意主谓一致，同时避免重复表达“comfortable”。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel more comfortable, and I can enjoy outdoor exercises like jogging or walking without any inconvenience.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have habit checking”应为“have a habit of checking”，“check weather forecast is a very useful things”应为“checking the weather forecast is very useful”。建议加强冠词和名词单复数的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast before I go out. It only takes a few seconds, and I find it very useful because it helps me prepare for the day.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重，如“a climate change make”应为“climate change has made”，“protect to our environment”应为“protect our environment”。句子不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, climate change in recent years has caused more extreme weather, with hotter summers and colder winters. This makes living conditions uncomfortable, so we should do more to protect our environment.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，如“try some new place or leaving a new place”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意动词形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new places and environments.

× I really like a sunny day.

✓ I really like sunny days.

这里'sunny day'应使用复数形式'sunny days'，因为表达的是一般喜欢晴天的情况，而不是特指某一天。

× It makes me very warm and make my emotion happily.

✓ It makes me feel very warm and makes my emotions happy.

动词'make'需要与主语一致，且表达情感时应使用'feel'，'emotion'应为复数形式，'happily'应改为形容词'happy'修饰'emotions'。

× And I think sunny day is simply days to make some outside exercise.

✓ And I think sunny days are simply days to do some outdoor exercise.

'sunny day'应为复数'sunny days'，谓语动词应与复数主语一致用'are'，'make some outside exercise'表达不准确，应改为'do some outdoor exercise'。

× because when you were cold you can put some clothes and you can wear a lot of clothes,

✓ because when you are cold you can put on some clothes and you can wear a lot of clothes,

此处描述的是一般事实，应使用一般现在时'are'，且'put some clothes'应为'put on some clothes'，表示穿衣服。

× but when you are hot you cannot to put all the clothes.

✓ but when you are hot you cannot put on all the clothes.

'cannot'后不加'to'，且'put all the clothes'应为'put on all the clothes'，表示穿衣服。

× I prefer dry weather because I think dry weather make me more comfortable

✓ I prefer dry weather because I think dry weather makes me more comfortable

主语'dry weather'为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× in the dry weather I can have some outside exercise such as jogging or walking.

✓ in dry weather I can do some outdoor exercise such as jogging or walking.

'have some outside exercise'表达不自然，应改为'do some outdoor exercise'，'outside'应改为'adjective'形式'outdoor'。

× Yes, I have habit checking the weather when I go out.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather when I go out.

'have habit checking'结构不正确，应为'have a habit of doing something'。

× And I think check weather forecast is a very useful things because it can remind me.

✓ And I think checking the weather forecast is a very useful thing because it can remind me.

'check weather forecast'应改为动名词形式'checking the weather forecast'，'things'应为单数'thing'，因为前面有形容词'useful'修饰。

× In my opinion, a climate change in recent years make our weather more hot and more cold.

✓ In my opinion, climate change in recent years has made our weather hotter and colder.

'climate change'不可数名词，不加冠词'a'，谓语动词应使用现在完成时'has made'，'more hot'和'more cold'应改为比较级'hotter'和'colder'。

× I think we should more and more protect to our environment and.

✓ I think we should protect our environment more and more.

'protect to our environment'中'protect'后不加介词'to'，且句子末尾不应有多余的'and'。

× Yes, I like to visit other cities which have different climates because I like to try some new place or leaving a new place.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities which have different climates because I like to try some new places or live in a new place.

'some new place'应为复数'some new places'，'leaving a new place'应改为'live in a new place'，表达居住新地方的意思。