Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Bring heavy showers and strong winds”缺少主语，且“cold cool”表达不准确。建议注意句子完整性和用词准确性，避免重复和不连贯。

Ví dụ: The weather in my hometown, Hangzhou, is usually warm and humid, especially during the summer months. Typhoons often bring heavy showers and strong winds, making the summer season quite wet but also refreshing.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“It easy to dress comfortably”应为“It is easy to dress comfortably”。建议注意语法完整性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't really like either cold or hot weather, but if I have to choose, I would prefer hot weather because it is easy to dress comfortably. Moreover, I can enjoy outdoor activities anytime without worrying about the cold, and hot weather makes me feel more energetic and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但表达不够准确，如“dry weather will lead me to make my skin dry and cracked”语法错误且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer wet weather because my hometown is humid, and I feel more comfortable in such conditions. Dry weather often makes my skin dry and cracked, which is quite uncomfortable for me.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整且自然，但时态使用不一致，如“checking the weather also helped me”应为“helps me”。建议注意时态一致性，并适当使用连接词增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially in the morning. Since it often rains in my hometown, I need to know whether to bring an umbrella. Besides, checking the weather helps me choose appropriate clothes so I can stay comfortable and prepared.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“I we can't see more extreme weather events and the melting”不通顺。建议加强句子结构，补充完整观点，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think the main causes of climate change in recent years are human activities such as industrialization and deforestation. These activities increase greenhouse gas emissions, leading to a rise in global temperatures. As a result, we can see more extreme weather events and the melting of polar ice caps.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且表达较自然，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。建议适当使用连接词如“for instance”或“moreover”来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I would love to visit cities with different climates because they often have unique architectures and agricultural practices. For instance, a city in a cold climate might have buildings designed to keep warm, while a tropical city could have more open and urban structures.

× Bring heavy showers and strong winds.

✓ They bring heavy showers and strong winds.

原句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应添加主语“they”来使句子完整。

× This makes the summer season quite wet, but also refreshing and cold cool.

✓ This makes the summer season quite wet, but also refreshing and cool.

“cold cool”中“cold”多余且用法不当，应删除以保持形容词搭配正确。

× It easy to dress comfortably and I can go outside anytime to enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about cold.

✓ It is easy to dress comfortably and I can go outside anytime to enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about the cold.

缺少第三人称单数动词“is”，且“worrying about cold”应加定冠词“the”表示特指寒冷。

× Also, dry weather will lead me to make my skin dry and cracked, which is quite uncomfortable about me.

✓ Also, dry weather will cause my skin to become dry and cracked, which is quite uncomfortable for me.

“lead me to make”用法不当，应改为“cause my skin to become”更自然；“uncomfortable about me”应改为“uncomfortable for me”。

× Besides, checking the weather also helped me choose appropriate clothes for the day so I can stay comfortable and prepared.

✓ Besides, checking the weather also helps me choose appropriate clothes for the day so I can stay comfortable and prepared.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“helps”而非过去时“helped”。

× These activities increase greenhouse gas emissions, which lead to rising global temperature.

✓ These activities increase greenhouse gas emissions, which leads to rising global temperatures.

关系代词“which”指代单数“emissions”，动词应使用第三人称单数“leads”；“temperature”应为复数“temperatures”表示全球气温变化。

× As a result, I we can't see more extreme weather events and the melting.

✓ As a result, we can see more extreme weather events and melting.

句中“I we”重复且错误，应删除“I”；“the melting”中“the”不必要，应直接用“melting”。