Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，注意单复数和时态的正确使用，同时增加连贯性。

Ví dụ: I live in Chengdu, where the weather is often cloudy and rainy. There are only two or three sunny days each month, which I find quite disappointing.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式错误和拼写错误。建议注意动词时态和拼写，同时可以适当扩展理由，使回答更完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I often get sick when it is cold. Warm weather makes me feel more comfortable and energetic.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有重复和语法错误。建议避免重复，简化表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because rainy days prevent me from going out and meeting my friends. Also, exercising in wet weather can be unsafe.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的短语，如'have a habit of'，并使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I usually do what I like regardless of the weather.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单复数和时态，使用更准确的词汇，并使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think climate change is a serious problem because it affects many people. For example, rising sea levels threaten coastal cities, which worries me a lot.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，并使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because my city often has cloudy and unpredictable weather. I hope to experience better weather elsewhere.

× I live in Chengdu and the weather in there is not good.

✓ I live in Chengdu and the weather there is not good.

句中“the weather in there”中的“in”多余，正确表达应为“the weather there”，表示“那里的天气”。

× There's a lot of overcast day and the rainy days and you can really see the sunny days in the months and it has just two or three sunny days in a month, so it's unfortunate.

✓ There are a lot of overcast days and rainy days, and you can rarely see sunny days in the months; it has just two or three sunny days in a month, so it's unfortunate.

“a lot of overcast day”中“day”应为复数“days”，因为“a lot of”后面接可数名词时用复数。

× I prefer hot weather because when the weather get cold I'm prone to seek.

✓ I prefer hot weather because when the weather gets cold I'm prone to sick.

主语“the weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“get”应加-s变为“gets”。另外，“prone to seek”应为“prone to sick”，但“prone to sick”也不正确，正确表达应为“prone to sickness”或“prone to getting sick”，此处只纠正语法问题。

× I prefer dry weather because when it is wet I can't go out and chat with my friends because it is unsafe to work out in the in the weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when it is wet I can't go out and chat with my friends because it is unsafe to work out in the weather.

句中“in the in the weather”重复，“in the”多余，应删除一个。

× No, I have not habit of checking the weather forecast because I think it's no matter the good or bad weather I will just do something I prefer.

✓ No, I have no habit of checking the weather forecast because I think it doesn't matter whether the weather is good or bad; I will just do something I prefer.

“have not habit”应为“have no habit”，表示“没有习惯”；“it's no matter”应为“it doesn't matter”，表达“没关系”；“the good or bad weather”应改为“whether the weather is good or bad”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I think the climate change in recent year is considerable problems because it may affect a lot of people living, like the level of the sea water may rise every years.

✓ I think climate change in recent years is a considerable problem because it may affect a lot of people living, like the level of the sea water may rise every year.

“climate change”不可数，前面不加“the”；“in recent year”应为“in recent years”，表示“近年来”；“considerable problems”应为单数“a considerable problem”，因为指的是整体问题；“every years”应为“every year”，“every”后接单数。

× Yes, because of my own city there is lots of overcast days and sometimes raining, sometimes shining.

✓ Yes, because in my own city there are lots of overcast days and sometimes raining, sometimes shining.

“there is lots of overcast days”中“lots of”后应接复数名词，谓语动词应用复数“are”而非“is”。