Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构的完整性，同时避免重复和多余的词汇。可以尝试用更简洁且连贯的句子描述天气特点。

Ví dụ: I live in the southern part of China, where the weather is often moody and rainy. It can change quickly; for example, it might be sunny one moment and then suddenly pour rain the next.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有重复词汇，建议分句表达并使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意时态和语法的准确性。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable due to sweaty and sticky clothes. In cold weather, I just need to wear more layers to stay warm and comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes it difficult for clothes to dry. Moreover, dry weather is better for outdoor activities with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较完整，但存在重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意时态和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast every morning before choosing my clothes. This helps me stay organized and decide if I need to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 回答中断且语法错误较多，建议提前组织语言，使用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: I think one noticeable effect of climate change is that summers have become much hotter than before. When I was a child, summer weather was pleasant enough to play outside with friends, but now it is often uncomfortably hot.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I live in southern China, so I really enjoyed my trip to northern China, where I experienced snow sports and snowy scenery, which are unusual for me.

× I live in the southern part of China where it was always a Moody and which means that it often rain a lot.

✓ I live in the southern part of China where it is always moody, which means that it often rains a lot.

这里“was”时态错误，应使用一般现在时“is”，因为描述的是常态。"Moody"不需要大写。动词“rain”应加第三人称单数形式“rains”，因为主语是单数"it"。

× And also I think the weather here is quite changeable because, you know, the last minute was sunny outside and then it's turned out to be a heavy rain.

✓ And also I think the weather here is quite changeable because, you know, a minute ago it was sunny outside and then it turned out to be heavy rain.

“last minute”应改为“a minute ago”更自然。"it's turned out"中“turned out”不需要被动形式，应使用主动过去式。"a heavy rain"中“rain”不可数，去掉冠词。

× when you are in hot conditions you have to endure the the sweaty clothes that are sticky to your skin which made me quite uncomfortable.

✓ when you are in hot conditions you have to endure the sweaty clothes that are sticky to your skin which make me quite uncomfortable.

“which made me”时态不一致，应改为“which make me”，因为前文描述的是一般事实。

× But when in cold weather the only thing you need to do is to put on more clothes so that will keep you warm and comfortable.

✓ But when in cold weather, the only thing you need to do is put on more clothes so that they will keep you warm and comfortable.

“put on”后不需要“to”，直接用动词原形。"that"指代不明确，应改为“they”指代“clothes”。

× I think I prefer dry weather because we're in a country wet weather, it will make it harder for you, your for the clothes you wash turn dry.

✓ I think I prefer dry weather because in our country, wet weather makes it harder for your clothes to dry.

句子结构混乱，需调整。"we're in a country wet weather"不通顺，应改为“in our country”。"clothes you wash turn dry"应改为“clothes to dry”。

× And what's more, I think dry weather often provide good conditions for you to seek more outdoor activities that can play with friends.

✓ And what's more, I think dry weather often provides good conditions for you to do more outdoor activities and play with friends.

“provide”主语是单数“dry weather”，应用“provides”。“seek more outdoor activities”表达不当，应改为“do more outdoor activities”。

× I think I will check the weather forecast like every day in the morning before I put all my clothes because I I am that kind of person who want to stay organized.

✓ I think I check the weather forecast every day in the morning before I put on all my clothes because I am that kind of person who wants to stay organized.

“I will check”表达习惯动作应用一般现在时“check”。“put all my clothes”应为“put on all my clothes”。“who want”主语是单数，应为“who wants”。

× So I like to check it to make sure what I need to wear and whether I should bring umbrella with me.

✓ So I like to check it to make sure what I need to wear and whether I should bring an umbrella with me.

“bring umbrella”缺少冠词，应为“bring an umbrella”。

× I think, uh, one of the notable changes that the weather in the summer begin hotter than ever because when I was a child, I the weather in summer is pleasant enough for me to just go outdoor having fun with my friend.

✓ I think, uh, one of the notable changes is that the weather in summer has become hotter than ever because when I was a child, the weather in summer was pleasant enough for me to just go outdoors and have fun with my friends.

“begin hotter”时态错误，应改为“has become hotter”。“I the weather”多余“ I ”应去掉。"go outdoor"应为“go outdoors”。“friend”应为复数“friends”。

× But nowadays the the weather became hotter so.

✓ But nowadays the weather has become hotter.

“became”是过去式，描述现在变化应使用现在完成时“has become”。

× Yes, for sure. As for me as As for me, I live in the southern part of the China, so I really enjoy the journey when I went to the the north edge of China where I can enjoy some snow sport and enjoy the the snowy things that are unusual to me.

✓ Yes, for sure. As for me, I live in the southern part of China, so I really enjoyed the journey when I went to the northern edge of China where I could enjoy some snow sports and the snowy things that are unusual to me.

“the China”应去掉冠词。"the the north edge"重复，应为“the northern edge”。“snow sport”应为复数“snow sports”。“enjoy the the snowy things”重复，应去掉多余的“the”。时态应保持一致，过去时用“enjoyed”和“could”。