Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免冗余。可以直接描述天气特点，句子简洁明了。

Ví dụ: I live in the north of China, where we experience four distinct seasons. Summers are usually warm but with little rainfall.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，语法时态混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I feel uncomfortable when I sweat in the heat. Also, I enjoy wearing warm clothes and seeing snow in winter.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达喜好和原因，避免使用不准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I am used to the dry climate in northern China. Wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但表达略显重复。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out, especially when I plan to travel or play soccer, to make sure I have a good time.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误明显，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，具体说明气候变化的影响。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused summers to become hotter in recent years, and sea levels have risen noticeably.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较长且有些重复，建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, as long as the weather is not too extreme. It would be exciting to experience a new environment.

× The place I live is short of a place in the north of China.

✓ The place I live is a city in the north of China.

原句中“short of a place”用法不当，表达不清。应改为“a city”明确指代居住的地方。

× In our city there are clearly Four Seasons.

✓ In our city, there are clearly four seasons.

“Four Seasons”不应大写，且句中缺少逗号，需调整大小写和标点。

× In the summer there will even be not much rainfall.

✓ In the summer, there is not much rainfall.

“will even be not much rainfall”结构不正确，描述常态天气应使用一般现在时。

× If the weather is too hot I will be uncomfortable about the feeling of sweating, but if it was cold I can just wear a thicker coat to fight against it and snow is the reason.

✓ If the weather is too hot, I will be uncomfortable because of sweating, but if it is cold, I can just wear a thicker coat to fight against it, and snow is the reason.

“if it was cold”应与前半句时态一致用“if it is cold”；“uncomfortable about the feeling of sweating”表达不自然，改为“uncomfortable because of sweating”。

× I prefer dry weather because, as you know, I'm a person who live in the north of China.

✓ I prefer dry weather because, as you know, I'm a person who lives in the north of China.

“who live”主语是单数“person”，动词应加-s，变为“lives”。

× In which place are the rain is not enough, so our air is lack of steam.

✓ In that place, the rain is not enough, so our air lacks moisture.

“are the rain is not enough”结构错误，应改为“the rain is not enough”；“air is lack of steam”表达不当，应改为“air lacks moisture”。

× I think I will not suit for the wet weather.

✓ I think I will not be suited to wet weather.

“suit for”用法错误，应为“be suited to”；“wet weather”前不加冠词。

× Yes, I do, but I don't have a fixed time for me to check the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I do, but I don't have a fixed time to check the weather forecast.

“for me to check”多余，直接用“不 have a fixed time to check”更自然。

× It's often when I want to go out to go on a journey or just to play soccer outdoors.

✓ I often check it when I want to go on a journey or just play soccer outdoors.

原句结构混乱，应调整为主语+动词+时间状语的正常句式。

× I will check it to ensure that my experience will be happy.

✓ I will check it to ensure that my experience will be enjoyable.

“experience will be happy”表达不自然，应改为“experience will be enjoyable”。

× I believe that since the effects of climate change, the summer become hot in recent years and apparently our heights of the sea higher.

✓ I believe that due to the effects of climate change, summers have become hotter in recent years and apparently our sea levels are higher.

“since the effects”用法错误，应为“due to the effects”；“the summer become hot”时态错误，应为“summers have become hotter”；“heights of the sea higher”表达不当，应为“sea levels are higher”。

× Yes, as long as the weather of the city which I want to go to is not so extreme, I will be glad to visit it and I think it will be a happy journey to experience a different climate from the city I lived.

✓ Yes, as long as the weather of the city I want to go to is not so extreme, I will be glad to visit it, and I think it will be a happy journey to experience a different climate from the city I live in.

“which I want to go to”中“which”可省略；“the city I lived”时态错误，应为“the city I live in”。