Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且信息表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并且避免冗余。

Ví dụ: I live in Tianjin, which is located in northern China. The weather here is usually moderate, not too dry or wet. Most days are sunny with little wind.

Gợi ý: 表达有些混乱，逻辑不够清晰。建议明确表达自己的喜好，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually prefer cold weather because I enjoy snow. However, since it rarely snows where I live, I prefer hot weather because I can use air conditioning and enjoy sunny mornings.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并且具体说明喜欢的原因。

Ví dụ: I generally prefer dry weather because it feels comfortable. However, I also enjoy rainy days because I like the sound of raindrops and seeing snails in the garden.

Gợi ý: 表达混乱，语法错误较多，信息不明确。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: I usually don't check the weather forecast, even during vacations or when I travel. Since I prefer staying indoors, the weather outside doesn't affect me much. If I'm curious, I just look outside the window.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: In my experience, the biggest effect of climate change is the hot and dry summers. My parents and I enjoy gardening, but this summer we had many difficulties taking care of our plants because of the intense heat and dryness.

Gợi ý: 表达有些重复且不够自然。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it would be a great experience to visit cities with different climates. I am looking forward to traveling to places like Shanghai or Changchun to enjoy new weather and scenery.

× Well, I live in Tianjin, is a middle bed above north in China like so.

✓ Well, I live in Tianjin, which is a middle belt above the north in China.

句中“middle bed”应为“middle belt”，且缺少关系代词“which”引导定语从句，表示天津的位置。这里涉及单复数和句子结构问题。

× Most of the time the sun shines up on the sky while there's no wind.

✓ Most of the time the sun shines in the sky while there's no wind.

短语“shines up on the sky”中“up on”用法不当，正确搭配是“shine in the sky”，表示太阳在天空中照耀。

× Although I am a snow person, the climate around my home doesn't allow snowing.

✓ Although I am a snow person, the climate around my home doesn't allow snow.

动词“allow”后应接动词原形或名词，不能接动名词“snowing”。这里应使用名词“snow”表示“下雪”。

× I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy the cold air condition and the rising sun at the same time.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy the cold air conditioning and the rising sun at the same time.

“air condition”应为“air conditioning”，表示空调设备。

× I generally prefer dry weather, however I enjoy the coldness and the wonderful sound that raindrops bring me and also I I love snails when humid environment bring many snails into my environment where I can.

✓ I generally prefer dry weather; however, I enjoy the coldness and the wonderful sound that raindrops bring me. Also, I love snails when a humid environment brings many snails into my surroundings where I can see them.

句中“humid environment bring”主谓不一致，应为“humid environment brings”；“environment”重复使用且表达不清，改为“surroundings”更合适。

× However, I have no habit about checking the weather for class have even in even in vacations or in another country.

✓ However, I have no habit of checking the weather for class, even during vacations or in another country.

“have no habit about”应为“have no habit of”，表示没有做某事的习惯；“in even in”重复，应删去。

× I am a indoor person so actually the weather outside doesn't really bothers me.

✓ I am an indoor person, so actually the weather outside doesn't really bother me.

“a indoor”应为“an indoor”，因为“indoor”以元音音素开头；“doesn't really bothers”主谓不一致，应为“doesn't really bother”。

× If I will have curious about the weather, I'll just open my window and have a look.

✓ If I am curious about the weather, I'll just open my window and have a look.

条件句中不应使用“will”，应使用一般现在时“am curious”表示条件。

× In my daily experience, perhaps the most biggest problem is the hot, dry, sunny days in summer.

✓ In my daily experience, perhaps the biggest problem is the hot, dry, sunny days in summer.

“most biggest”是冗余表达，比较级“biggest”已经包含最高级含义，不需要“most”。

× Well, me and my parents all have gardening as a hobby.

✓ Well, my parents and I all have gardening as a hobby.

主语顺序应为“my parents and I”，且“me”用作主语不正确，应使用主格“I”。

× In this year's summer. We face many difficulties in arranging our plants because of the dry hot sun.

✓ This summer, we faced many difficulties in arranging our plants because of the dry, hot sun.

“In this year's summer.”为不完整句，应与后句合并；时态应为过去时“faced”，因为指的是过去的夏天；“dry hot sun”中间应加逗号。

× because of the dry hot sun.

✓ because of the hot, dry sun.

形容词顺序应为“hot, dry”，通常先描述温度，再描述湿度。

× And now I'm planning trips to a different cities in China, for example Shanghai or Changchun.

✓ And now I'm planning trips to different cities in China, for example Shanghai or Changchun.

“a different cities”中“a”与复数名词“cities”不匹配，应去掉“a”。

× I'm very looking forward to it.

✓ I'm really looking forward to it.

“very looking forward”搭配不正确，应使用副词“really”修饰动词短语“looking forward”。