Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复使用“really”，并且可以更自然地表达温度范围。建议用更地道的表达方式描述天气特点。

Ví dụ: I live in Guiyang, the capital of Guizhou. The weather here is quite pleasant; winters are mild with temperatures usually above freezing, and summers are warm, averaging around 30 degrees Celsius.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“slasher”应为“sluggish”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化的“you know”。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because hot days make me feel sluggish and tired. In cold weather, I enjoy wearing warm clothes and feel more energetic to go outside.

Gợi ý: 注意拼写错误，“draw”应为“dry”，并且句子结构需调整以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and it's easier to stay clean and fresh throughout the day. In contrast, wet weather often makes everything sticky and clothes damp.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，如“forecast sometimes are”应为“forecasts are sometimes”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的语法和连词，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out so I can dress appropriately. Although forecasts are not always accurate, they help me decide whether to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“gradual cost of flood damage”不明确，“unpracticable”用词不当。建议使用准确词汇并组织清晰句子。

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events. For example, heavy rainfall recently led to serious flooding. Summers have become hotter, and winters colder, making the weather less predictable.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不清，如“Guaya”应为“Guiyang”，“vaccination”用词错误。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达愿望。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Since winters in Guiyang are quite mild and rarely snowy, I would love to visit northeastern cities where heavy snowfall is common. Also, because Guiyang is inland, I would like to visit coastal cities to enjoy the beach.

× In winter the temperature is really above 0°, and in summer the average temperature is 30°.

✓ In winter the temperature is really above 0°, and in summer the average temperature is 30°.

该句无单复数错误。

× I just want to stay in front of farms all day.

✓ I just want to stay in front of fans all day.

原句中 'farms' 应为 'fans'，可能是拼写错误，且 'stay in front of fans' 表示待在风扇前更符合语境。

× It makes me slasher.

✓ It makes me slouchier.

'slasher' 不是正确的形容词，可能想表达 'slouchier'（更懒散）或 'sluggish'（迟缓），需根据语境选择合适词汇。

× Actually I like draw weather, it feel more comfortable and it is easier to stay clean and fresher all day.

✓ Actually I like dry weather, it feels more comfortable and it is easier to stay clean and fresher all day.

'draw' 应为 'dry'，且主语是单数 'it'，动词应为 'feels'。

× Also it makes me a decision whether I need to bring an umbrella.

✓ Also it helps me make a decision whether I need to bring an umbrella.

'makes me a decision' 结构错误，应改为 'helps me make a decision'，动词搭配正确。

× Well, there are some extreme weather, you know, a few days ago a heavy rainfall in gradual cost of flood damage, which was really serious.

✓ Well, there is some extreme weather, you know, a few days ago a heavy rainfall gradually caused flood damage, which was really serious.

'weather' 是不可数名词，前面应使用单数 'is'，且句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Also, I think the weather has become more unpracticable, the summer become more hotter and the winter become more.

✓ Also, I think the weather has become more unpredictable, the summer has become hotter and the winter colder.

'unpracticable' 用词错误，应为 'unpredictable'；'more hotter' 是比较级错误，应为 'hotter'；'the winter become more' 不完整，应补充形容词。

× You know, the weather of winter in Guaya is so warm, so I almost can see snow.

✓ You know, the winter weather in Guaya is so warm that I can hardly see snow.

'the weather of winter' 应改为 'the winter weather'，且表达更自然；'almost can see snow' 语义不符，应为 'hardly see snow'。

× So going to the northeast cities which have heavy snowfalls in winter is my vaccination.

✓ So going to the northeast cities which have heavy snowfalls in winter is my vacation plan.

'vaccination' 是 '疫苗接种'，应为 'vacation'（假期），词汇错误。

× And also because Guayan is an island city so I really go to beach.

✓ And also because Guayan is an island city, I really want to go to the beach.

缺少冠词 'the'，'go to beach' 应为 'go to the beach'，且缺少动词 'want' 使句子完整。