Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to answer more directly and naturally. Avoid redundant phrases like 'I would like to prefer' and use simpler expressions. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific details with linking words.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually mild. It is neither too hot nor too cold, typically ranging from 15 to 20 degrees Celsius, which I find very comfortable.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases like 'I would like to prefer' and filler words such as 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more coherent. Be concise and clear in your explanation.

Ví dụ: I prefer warm weather, around 20 degrees Celsius, because it is comfortable for walking. This temperature allows me to enjoy outdoor activities without feeling too hot or cold.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repeating words like 'very easily' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' to make your answer more logical and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it makes it easier to go outside. For example, I can drive and travel without any problems, whereas wet weather often makes these activities uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about frequency and timing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast daily using the weather app on my iPhone. I plan my activities based on the temperature, especially when it is moderate.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and filler words. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Climate change is a serious problem affecting human life. One main cause is pollution from automobiles, which contributes to global warming and increases health problems.

Gợi ý: Avoid awkward phrases like 'I would like to prefer visit'. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific about why you want to visit these places.

Ví dụ: Yes, I live in Tianjin, China, and I would like to visit cities like Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou, as well as countries such as Japan, Australia, and Belgium. I am interested in experiencing their different climates and cultures.

× I would like to prefer a normal weather.

✓ I would prefer normal weather.

The phrase 'would like to prefer' is incorrect because 'prefer' is a verb that expresses preference directly. Using 'would like to' with 'prefer' is redundant. Also, 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article 'a'. The correct form is 'I would prefer normal weather.'

× I would like to prefer a normal weather.

✓ I would prefer normal weather.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I would like to prefer hot weather, but not, uh, very hot.

✓ I would prefer hot weather, but not very hot.

Similar to the previous correction, 'would like to prefer' is incorrect. 'Would prefer' is the correct modal verb usage to express preference.

× because I would like to prefer a walk and in a normal degree centigrade around 20°C to walk is very uh, well, we can do it easily.

✓ because I would prefer to walk when the temperature is around 20°C, which is comfortable and easy to do.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition use. 'Prefer to walk' is the correct verb + infinitive form. Also, 'in a normal degree centigrade' is incorrect; it should be 'when the temperature is around 20°C'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would like to prefer dry weather because in dry weather we can go out very easily, very easily.

✓ I would prefer dry weather because in dry weather we can go out very easily.

Again, 'would like to prefer' is incorrect; 'would prefer' is the correct modal verb usage. Also, repetition of 'very easily' is unnecessary.

× I would like to prefer my event activities.

✓ I would prefer to plan my activities.

The phrase 'would like to prefer' is incorrect. Also, 'my event activities' is awkward; 'plan my activities' is clearer. Using 'would prefer to' plus verb is the correct structure.

× It's due to the auto car.

✓ It's due to automobiles.

'Auto car' is not a common phrase; 'automobiles' or 'cars' is the correct plural noun. Also, 'due to' should be followed by a noun phrase, so 'automobiles' fits better.

× It's a it's a main reason, automobile is the main reason for the climate change and it's causing the human disease.

✓ It's the main reason; automobiles are the main cause of climate change and they cause human diseases.

The sentence has redundancy and singular/plural inconsistency. 'Automobile' should be plural 'automobiles' to match 'cause'. Also, 'human disease' should be plural 'human diseases' to indicate multiple health issues. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would like to prefer visit the Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and different other countries and other cities like Japan, Australia, Belgium and I would like to check their climate.

✓ I would like to visit Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, and other countries and cities like Japan, Australia, and Belgium to check their climates.

'Would like to prefer visit' is incorrect; 'would like to visit' is correct. Also, 'the Beijing' is incorrect; city names do not take 'the'. 'Different other countries' is redundant; 'other countries' suffices. 'Climate' should be plural 'climates' when referring to multiple places.